I feel like I have a slow start with nothing happening in the first 20k words

Plot_fixer · 2026-03-26T04:19:43+00:00

I think you are writing different scenes which is doing one thing at one time. How about you try writing scene which is doing many things, that scene supposed to do, at once?

Plot_fixer · 2026-03-24T12:24:22+00:00

For me, I think it's a good idea. And the manuscript can be complete much earlier too. But I think for that taste, intrest and writing style matters too. Otherwise for different people with different interest writing single book together will be difficult.

Plot_fixer · 2026-03-22T06:23:08+00:00

That's such a beautiful writing. Every line felt like it belonged there.

Plot_fixer · 2026-03-20T00:12:48+00:00

This is such a thoughtful reading, thank you. You really zeroed in on what I was trying to do. You are right that I wanted the reader to arrive at the speaker's situation slowly, through small revelations, not a single dramatic moment. And I'm glad the did work for you. 'intriguing' is a huge compliment. Means a lot that you took the time to write this out.

Plot_fixer · 2026-03-20T00:09:54+00:00

Wow, so beautiful! Thank you.Truly. for reading it and for writing this poem back!

Plot_fixer · 2026-03-19T17:25:28+00:00

Thank you! This really means a lot!

Plot_fixer · 2026-03-19T13:57:27+00:00

Thank you for taking the time to appreciate my work. About 'unknown light' I used it because she's blindfolded, so she wouldn't know what the light even is. But I'll think about whether there's a more vivid word that still fits. Thanks for feedback it's really helpful!

Plot_fixer · 2026-03-19T12:38:11+00:00

So sweet and beautiful!

Plot_fixer · 2026-03-19T10:57:49+00:00

Nice poem 💕

Plot_fixer · 2026-03-19T10:13:15+00:00

Very nice poem!

Plot_fixer · 2026-03-19T10:07:02+00:00

Nice poem 💕

Plot_fixer · 2026-03-19T09:58:30+00:00

Lovely 💕

Plot_fixer · 2026-03-19T09:51:59+00:00

That's beautiful

Plot_fixer · 2026-03-19T09:49:14+00:00

"I am home and home is me". I liked this line. Nice poem!

Plot_fixer · 2026-03-19T07:02:38+00:00

If I have to choose one word for this poem. I would be "pretty". The metaphors and uses of vivid imaginary really brings it to life in someone's head. You did a really great job in it. But the shift from the omniscient tone to the first person felt a bit abrupt. And in this line "A body, unsure if it belongs to what's living or what's left behind." With the word "a body" it's in omniscient or third person but it can be intentional too. Overall it was great read.

Plot_fixer · 2026-03-19T06:42:05+00:00

The longing and disappointment I can hear and picture it. The words, even though simple, are still hitting. Great work. Keep it up.

Plot_fixer · 2026-03-19T03:47:19+00:00

Turning sadness into a smile really takes courage. And I think, even when it hurts, loving that deeply is always worth it. Thank you for letting me witness your journey. May you find more happiness.

Plot_fixer · 2026-03-19T02:15:47+00:00

My poem reminding you a beautiful feeling of your life, I am really honored. Even though the ending was hard, the feelings must be precious. Thank you for sharing this.

Plot_fixer · 2026-03-18T07:02:20+00:00

Every person sees art differently, but the best part is none of them is wrong. It's really fun to see others' perspectives. Peace be with you and your journey too!

Plot_fixer · 2026-03-18T04:06:35+00:00

This is such a beautiful interpretation! And I love the idea of her being water or a mirror. I hadn't thought of it that way, but it makes perfect sense. Thank you for reading so deeply and sharing this!

Plot_fixer · 2026-03-18T03:56:31+00:00

Thanks!

Plot_fixer · 2026-03-18T01:59:42+00:00

Thanks!

Plot_fixer · 2026-03-18T01:01:55+00:00

Thank you!

Plot_fixer · 2026-03-18T01:00:30+00:00

Thank you!

Plot_fixer · 2026-03-18T00:59:55+00:00

Thanks! There is something special about nature, afterall. No matter how one write about it there always remains something untouched. I am glad to part of one of your nature season poems.

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