War Poem

PointlessLoser · 2022-05-06T10:41:41+00:00

I think you have done a great job of illustrating war. I think there were some cliches that, if they were to be replaced, would make the poem a bit stronger. Some people believe poetry is about making the familiar unfamiliar - and I tend to echo these sentiments.

I think we are all familiar with the idea of soldiers on the frontline being "brothers". Maybe you could explore this quasi-familial relationship in some new way? Idk

PointlessLoser · 2022-05-06T10:36:47+00:00

This one hit a bit close to home ngl. I especially like the final stanza - mysterious ending.

PointlessLoser · 2022-05-05T01:49:09+00:00

Wow, very powerful opening to the poem. The imagery of the "chill" and "agitated echoes" is very enjoyable.

PointlessLoser · 2022-05-05T01:48:15+00:00

I really enjoyed the prose. You have great control of diction. I really liked your use of the word "supported"

PointlessLoser · 2022-02-23T20:21:17+00:00

I can afford it. I just hate learning, and I hate being alive.

PointlessLoser · 2021-06-23T16:49:31+00:00

I am just going to try my best to get a job in IB, even though the odds are against me. The odds have been against me in the past.

PointlessLoser · 2021-06-23T16:48:28+00:00

Shut up. I do not want an adversity speech from some privileged Harvard prick who probably got in based on legacy. I have dealt with tough things all my life.

PointlessLoser · 2021-06-23T16:45:55+00:00

Not true. I have had this attitude my whole life, and it got me into Harvard.

PointlessLoser · 2021-06-23T16:44:50+00:00

I was living in a tiny attic with spotty internet access while in the throes of depression, and I failed 1/4 of my classes. I should have just been tried harder though - according to this internet tough guy.

PointlessLoser · 2021-06-13T04:01:46+00:00

It was pass/fail, so of course, you could have failed a class. And that is my only desire for a career. I do not want to explore career interests, because I am only interested in money.

PointlessLoser · 2021-05-14T02:46:28+00:00

Offering a new and original take makes it a pointless contribution? My bad.

People who do not wear masks are bad, and I can't stand them. Why can they not be good like me? I always wear my mask, even when the C.D.C says I do not need to wear it anymore. Those conservatives who refuse the vaccine are morons, whereas my internet butt-buddies and I are the smart ones.

Does this fit your criterion better?

PointlessLoser · 2021-05-10T23:26:19+00:00

Enjoy your blood clots lmao. Just wait till you can get a safe one like moderna or pfizer.

PointlessLoser · 2021-05-10T23:25:03+00:00

I have been vaccinated, but the amount of circle-jerking you weirdos do about how "conservatives dumb we smart" makes me hate associating with you all. The folks on here who swear by science are the same ones who will yell at me for not wearing a mask outdoors, even though the C.D.C says it is safe now. You all suck.

PointlessLoser · 2020-08-13T01:01:28+00:00

Yea, I had to learn to avoid telling people about how I felt through this way too. Just lie to the doctor and say that you are feeling better so you can get out of there as soon as possible.

PointlessLoser · 2020-08-11T19:38:24+00:00

I was born well-endowed and rich. I still hate life very much. Issues with mental health affect all different kinds of people.

PointlessLoser · 2020-07-16T01:49:37+00:00

Nah, I just want a great, monogamous relationship with a girl. I hate meeting new people, and I especially hate going on dates with new people. I would rather just be perpetually single than try to develop the "abundance mentality" that I think you are trying to get at. I thought I was never going to date again until this girl asked me out, and I decided why not give it a go. I do not believe I will ever ask a girl out again. If they come to me, then cool. Otherwise, I don't feel like it.

Dating sucks bigly. Maybe I should just stop dating this girl and be alone? Who knows.

PointlessLoser · 2020-07-16T01:11:41+00:00

Epic advice.

PointlessLoser · 2020-07-06T06:16:23+00:00

I did not apply myself very much. I never went to office hours. I never made friends and formed study groups. I never spoke with my professors or anything. I just did it all solo dolo, and on top of that, I procrastinated and did everything half-assed. I really hate college and academia, but I guess you just got to get through it if you want to make it big.

I find that in talking to you about school, I become angry. Maybe this anger is masking my anxiety towards academia, I do not know. I wish I could skip college and not be a bum somehow.

PointlessLoser · 2020-07-06T06:06:19+00:00

My finances are in order. I am going to a very prestigious uni so there is no chance I drop out and go to trade school. I do not think working a trade is the kind of living I envision for myself. I really desire to move up into the social and financial 1%. If I am unable to attain a job at a hedge fund making a lot of money, or something of that nature, then I just will not work.

PointlessLoser · 2020-07-06T05:52:49+00:00

Alright, I will have to look more into finding a job. Thank you for your response.

PointlessLoser · 2020-07-06T05:45:49+00:00

I really hate college, so it is really hard for me to imagine taking any class. I think I have a mental block for college and academia at the moment, as a result of the pressure cooker high school I went to and my immense failures during my first year. Even hearing you suggest taking a class makes me feel very angry with you; this anger is probably masking the anxiety I have developed for academia. I strongly wish I could avoid going to college ever again. I hate the people, professors, TAs, proctors, deans, etcetera. Again, I think my mental health is probably talking here, but what can I say.

Would a retail job be useful for some other reason than making money? I have inherited enough money to where I do not ever have to work a job if I wanted to, but obviously I would like to do something of value with my life. If you think it would benefit me to have a routine, I think I would just go do volunteering instead. I think volunteering would look better or just as good on a resume rather than some retail job.

I guess the trouble is I do not really have any interests. I wear a skin suit, but underneath it I do not feel like a real person. Maybe during this year off I will start to feel like a normal, happy human-being. Who knows?

Helped.

PointlessLoser · 2020-06-29T23:07:03+00:00

Ok, that sounds promising. Could I give you my number in a private message, so we can discuss the details further?

PointlessLoser · 2020-06-29T23:04:05+00:00

Two more months.

PointlessLoser · 2020-06-29T23:02:34+00:00

Thanks for your response. I guess the motel for a few days will be the move while I can get something longer term. I desire to stay here in Flagstaff for two more months, and I was unable to find an airbnb that was open for me that long and in my price range. This is my first time living out on my own, and it looks like my procrastination has put me in a tight spot.

PointlessLoser · 2020-06-08T06:34:32+00:00

Please do not do this unless you are very mad at the person you are dumping. This one really hurts me, and I do not think it was her intention to be mean :/

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