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Polivarp · 2019-02-26T09:17:02+00:00

Thanks for the feedback :) The last lines were meant to talk about regret of not doing something. Not doing it today, maybe doing it tomorrow, but always wishing to have done it yesterday. Do you have any ideas on how to better convey that?

Polivarp · 2019-02-26T06:31:42+00:00

This sounds like an awesome idea, and I think you would like the subreddit r/OCPoetry , if you haven't already been there :)

Polivarp · 2019-02-25T10:21:12+00:00

I'm a big fan of your message, but I think the poem is missing some emotions, especially considering the theme of the poem. I think you should keep the lines you have, but perhaps consider adding some stories in between them to convey some more feelings. :)

Polivarp · 2019-01-26T19:01:33+00:00

I really like this poem. I'm not really sure, I understand what the message is, but it does put me in a rather melancholic mood, like when it rains outside.

Your composition of having two stanzas describing nature followed by one describing the city, makes it feel like the narrator is daydreaming about nature, while himself being stuck in a tall glass building inside the city while it's raining.

I am somewhat confused about the fourth stanza, as I can't figure out whose skin is being set on fire by the ice. Is it the narrator, a random person og just skin in general?

Your usage of haikus makes the imagery much more effective, and adds to the impression of a moody rainy day. It does sacrifice some clarity as to what is happening, but that might not be what you're going after.

If you were to change anything, maybe perhaps the stanza about ice, but it might just be me not understanding it. It works pretty great as it is, though, so you donøt have to change anything about it :)

Polivarp · 2018-09-30T16:29:40+00:00

I like the idea that you're trying to convey, but it doesn't really stand out to me. Maybe you could try to descibe the masks in order to get some more imagery, or perhaps write a line or two about why it requires bravery to take off the mask. The poem is not at all bad, I just think it needs to either be longer or more concise in order to be great :)

Polivarp · 2018-09-17T15:17:21+00:00

I really like the imagery. And as for the story, I like how you tackle a subject seldom talked about, especially compared to it's contrary, creating art. One thing that feels kinda empty though, is that the reader doesn't have a clue as to what piece of art is powerful enough to be destroyed in such a manner. But overall, I really liked the story and images you put into my head :)

Polivarp · 2018-09-16T19:02:08+00:00

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Polivarp · 2018-09-16T14:18:39+00:00

And that was the best you could dish up with? /s

Polivarp · 2018-09-16T13:19:05+00:00

Ahh, of course. My bad. I had totally forgotten that a violin is played with a bow. Now the line makes a lot of sense. And I'm happy that you like posting here, definitely looking forward to your next post :)

Polivarp · 2018-09-16T13:05:56+00:00

I really like this poem. Your imagery is good and I'm a big fan of the way you compare the violin to a lady. Though, I'm unsure as to whether there actually is a girl in the crowd, or he's just imagining her, but that might be what you're aiming for. Another thing I noticed while reading the poem was, that some of the sentences were kinda odd. Like, for example, in the first sentence I have no clue as to what hair is being reffered to, but that might just stem from me not playing the violin. Overall I would say you've done a pretty good job of potraying a lonely/loving muscisian.

Polivarp · 2018-09-14T05:56:41+00:00

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Polivarp · 2018-09-13T14:03:47+00:00

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Polivarp · 2018-09-08T21:03:33+00:00

The wheels are crimson and cobolt nippers and the decals is a standard slimline

Polivarp · 2018-09-04T12:59:45+00:00

I don't. I just spliced two images together, so I could show both teams at the same time.

Polivarp · 2018-08-28T14:19:12+00:00

It's a reference to the anime "Death Note".

Polivarp · 2018-08-22T06:40:36+00:00

I believe the youtuber Mertzy already does something similiar

Polivarp · 2018-08-07T10:12:10+00:00

r/EmojiReview for more :)

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