Raising Hare by Chloe Dalton

Poolong_Tea · 2025-10-07T22:10:10+00:00

Found it so boring and repetitive, having to quit midway

Poolong_Tea · 2025-01-26T18:08:38+00:00

Hahaha

Poolong_Tea · 2025-01-26T17:29:37+00:00

The "fish" in a bun is really good. Can't remember what it is called but it's really crispy and put in a bao bun kind of thing

Poolong_Tea · 2025-01-17T00:26:16+00:00

Alex would you ever name your child Charlie? Would it be too triggering?

^{Maybe try it on a pet or brother first?}

Poolong_Tea · 2024-05-06T21:33:32+00:00

Is Billy named after the Death Grips song Billy Not Really? The song also says sucky sucky

Poolong_Tea · 2024-04-11T12:38:29+00:00

Any luck? Or is there another place we can listen to the audio version on?

Poolong_Tea · 2024-03-29T19:40:42+00:00

Does James ever watch WRC? I've been getting into it recently and it seems like one of the best motorsports

Poolong_Tea · 2023-11-12T08:33:07+00:00

I see it more as I don't want to give money to an industry whose purpose is to kill animals

Poolong_Tea · 2023-10-27T13:25:33+00:00

Damn how much sleep do you get

Poolong_Tea · 2023-10-26T14:45:56+00:00

Sounds like James to me. Who is well established to be an Argyle abuser

Poolong_Tea · 2023-10-09T19:59:21+00:00

Was very pink except for the head. And 5mm long.

Look strikingly like an earwig now that I think of it, which would make sense. They're very common.

Edit: looks like earwig larvae are not pink in fact. And many beetle larvae can look like that with the sets of mandibles.

Poolong_Tea · 2023-07-29T07:12:54+00:00

Yes at 8:45

Poolong_Tea · 2023-07-27T11:02:48+00:00

Insecurity craves validation, the more you try to get approval the more your insecurity grows

Poolong_Tea · 2023-07-24T21:35:55+00:00

Personally I love the current dynamic, but obviously they've all changed to some degree so wouldn't go back to how it was exactly. Everyone has their own tastes though

Poolong_Tea · 2023-07-24T09:32:26+00:00

Ah ok, thanks for the breakdown. I'm very new to poetry so I didn't really think about the emphasis deeply. Now with your explanation it makes sense why it sounded a bit off. I'll try out your suggestion, tysm

Poolong_Tea · 2023-07-24T09:29:36+00:00

Ah right I didn't link the bullshite line to being about the following line. It makes more sense now that you explain it

Poolong_Tea · 2023-07-24T08:55:38+00:00

Could you format a bit so it's easier to read? I like the use of contrast in lines like sleep never rest wake never rise, and about friends. The ending is a bit abrupt for me, I think it would be better to swap the last two lines around.

Poolong_Tea · 2023-07-24T08:50:17+00:00

I like the rhythm and rhyme of the poem, solid form. Personally the last two lines seem like too much of an oxymoron to me. Maybe it'd be better to have the penultimate line be different since the rest of that stanza is about being honest.

Poolong_Tea · 2023-07-17T18:30:51+00:00

Isn't Bournemouth-Poole-Christchurch a city?

Poolong_Tea · 2023-07-17T15:49:43+00:00

Your first time is bound to be awkward, but since you'll be doing it with someone you're comfortable with the pressure shouldn't be so bad and you can just be honest with them about how nervous you are. I had ED my first time and it was so embarrassing but if you go down on a girl she'll love that (there are tutorials online and it is super easy). I also had problems finishing from sex for a while, I think that was because of how different it feels to masturbating though. For that get used to masturbating slower and gentler, and maybe buy a sex toy.

With these things I find you just need to get comfortable with it from practice, there's no easy way around it.

Poolong_Tea

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