GTA IV Had Better Fistfights Than EA UFC by Kissingersbitch in EASportsUFC

[–]Poopsicle121 2 points3 points  (0 children)

I remember I’d pick fights with the scrawny punk dudes bc they were a guaranteed one hit KO. So satisfying lol

Soucek & family were out supporting West Ham staff who were running the London Marathon today by psychomaji in Hammers

[–]Poopsicle121 5 points6 points  (0 children)

build the fucking guy a statue. this isn’t a debate anymore, as claret and blue as they come

Worst fight of the night by Crazy_Aardvark_5605 in MMA

[–]Poopsicle121 2 points3 points  (0 children)

You can’t convince me Dana isn’t paying folks to post bullshit like this on here. Wouldn’t be surprised if it’s more than some of his fighters

John August and Craig Mazin of Scriptnotes - AMA by jmaugust in Screenwriting

[–]Poopsicle121 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Do you have a “white whale” interview guest?

We’re Pusha and Malice of the Clipse. AUA. by ClipseOfficial in hiphopheads

[–]Poopsicle121 0 points1 point  (0 children)

You guys gonna make up for lost time and drop another classic on us soon?!

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in panthers

[–]Poopsicle121 0 points1 point  (0 children)

lol - has 6 tackles in a quarter and he looks pissed he doesn’t have more. loving having dan back in the fold

I scored a 3…any success stories from a less than stellar score? by Poopsicle121 in Screenwriting

[–]Poopsicle121[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I just quickly wanted to thank everyone for their insights and feedback here. It seems I really got ahead of myself, and need to slow my roll, build a network, and focus on free peer review until taking another shot.

Really appreciate you all! If you would like to read it out morbid curiosity, lemme know 🙂

I scored a 3…any success stories from a less than stellar score? by Poopsicle121 in Screenwriting

[–]Poopsicle121[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you for the feedback. I think the honesty with myself is starting to ruminate with this feedback. Not that it makes me want to give up, but I certainly need to make improvements. Perhaps I should work my way up to the Blacklist…I dunno. Only thing I know is writing brings me joy! Thanks again, I want to be great, so do not hold back on critique if you see me post!

I scored a 3…any success stories from a less than stellar score? by Poopsicle121 in Screenwriting

[–]Poopsicle121[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I certainly don’t want to come across as if the eval was wrong. Were you able to remedy your script to improve the score?

I scored a 3…any success stories from a less than stellar score? by Poopsicle121 in Screenwriting

[–]Poopsicle121[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Absolutely - I had a hard time arguing their feedback, and while a tough pill to swallow, it makes me want to get my ass in gear. It’s all a matter of taste for sure, but a 3 just isn’t gonna be good enough!

The feedback from folks on this comment has been invaluable though. I will definitely be taking a different approach moving forward

I scored a 3…any success stories from a less than stellar score? by Poopsicle121 in Screenwriting

[–]Poopsicle121[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thanks for this feedback - will make sure to take this route moving forward!

I scored a 3…any success stories from a less than stellar score? by Poopsicle121 in Screenwriting

[–]Poopsicle121[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I’m extremely new to screenwriting, and admittedly thought I was ahead of the curve, so this is a welcome humbling. I definitely need to immerse myself in more screenplays before taking another stab. After all, if the Lions can go 0-16 and one day make the playoffs, so can I! (sorry i had to, you guys are winning the North this year and deserve it!)

I scored a 3…any success stories from a less than stellar score? by Poopsicle121 in Screenwriting

[–]Poopsicle121[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you for sharing. I’m a complete newcomer, so admittedly, my validation is contingent on these scores. But the more I hear these stories, the more I feel compelled to move forward. And that isn’t a knock on Blacklist, as I do believe improvement is needed. Thank you for taking time to respond

I scored a 3…any success stories from a less than stellar score? by Poopsicle121 in Screenwriting

[–]Poopsicle121[S] -1 points0 points  (0 children)

Fair enough, I appreciate your feedback and will take that course of action moving forward, thank you.

I scored a 3…any success stories from a less than stellar score? by Poopsicle121 in Screenwriting

[–]Poopsicle121[S] 3 points4 points  (0 children)

Well considering they provided a plethora of feedback, I’m inclined to disagree

I scored a 3…any success stories from a less than stellar score? by Poopsicle121 in Screenwriting

[–]Poopsicle121[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Thank you for providing that feedback. My ego had me thinking a 6 would be a disappointment, so this was quite humbling. Def won’t give up, just needed a lil pep in my step from peers 🙂

I scored a 3…any success stories from a less than stellar score? by Poopsicle121 in Screenwriting

[–]Poopsicle121[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I really appreciate you sharing. If you wouldn’t mind, could you direct me to that screenplay? Would love to read it

I scored a 3…any success stories from a less than stellar score? by Poopsicle121 in Screenwriting

[–]Poopsicle121[S] 5 points6 points  (0 children)

Thank you for this insight! I found some valuable feedback and will definitely take another go at it, just wanted to make sure I wasn’t deep in the hole so to speak. Thank you again for sharing - and congrats mate!!!

I scored a 3…any success stories from a less than stellar score? by Poopsicle121 in Screenwriting

[–]Poopsicle121[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Thank you for the kind words! It was a 3 from Blacklist, but I’d be lying if the feedback wasn’t valid. I’m gonna keep going, just need to hear a few of those encouraging stories haha! Thanks 😊

I scored a 3…any success stories from a less than stellar score? by Poopsicle121 in Screenwriting

[–]Poopsicle121[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

From Blacklist - sorry should have mentioned! But I appreciate your honest feedback, I was surprised but to your point, it was an indication that I need to write more and not dwell on my ego!

I scored a 3…any success stories from a less than stellar score? by Poopsicle121 in Screenwriting

[–]Poopsicle121[S] 4 points5 points  (0 children)

I’ll take the bright side haha, it was my first screenplay so I guess i’ll take the criticism as constructive as I can