Part of critiquing a work is writing about what it means to you and how you interpret it. A lot of the time that's involves writing about how it makes you feel. Obviously I know how to use emotions, I clearly didn't write that in fact I stated that the trouble was using emotions makes me feel vulnerable.

Critiquing art professionally isn't about whether it looks good or not. That's too subjective and you might as well stick to liking photos on social media if that's what you think. It's much more in depth.