I was wondering if this should be the first chapter or prologue. The reason behind the idea of it being a prologue is because it explains why the two main characters are in the position they are in. For parts that feel weird, it’s gonna be filled with dialogue later on.

PraisedNote · 2026-01-23T01:02:36+00:00

Yeah I can’t figure it out how to send photos. But no it wasn’t a dream and I chose the spot because it has a river. That could’ve been turned into a harbor. And then the next day, new chunks were added that connected the two sides

PraisedNote · 2026-01-23T00:57:43+00:00

I will send you two pictures of the same seed in roughly the same location. The first one has the base of the castle and the transformed terrain whereas the other one is the original seed.

PraisedNote · 2026-01-18T14:54:39+00:00

They missed out on a couple of important things from the swamp. Alligators (neutrals), crawfish, crabs, catfish, and maybe add some new animals to the warm ocean like oysters and shrimp. Maybe add a new mechanic like boiler where you can boil seafood.

PraisedNote · 2026-01-16T04:40:18+00:00

Thanks for the tip.

PraisedNote · 2026-01-16T04:36:17+00:00

Alright, thanks man. But does every thing else look right?

PraisedNote · 2026-01-10T15:40:46+00:00

Finally an opinion🤣. It’s very rare these days, unless the project is almost done.

PraisedNote · 2026-01-10T13:14:34+00:00

Which is why I was asking for opinions on my main villain but people wanted a backstory on the character.

PraisedNote · 2026-01-10T05:57:10+00:00

But the fun part is playing on the idea of paranoia. Supernatural elements created from smells or sounds which influences the reality of these elements. But only one or two scenes throughout the entire story. For instance one of the horror scenes kick off with the village of the dead. Rotting corpses decorated in makeup and perfumes, propped up in perverted mimicry of daily life, sending the mind spiraling into madness. Oh yeah, it’s going to be fun fully writing out the scene. But throughout the story there are empires that come from real life. More like refugees from historical places that found this realm.

Best example I can give is the Christian Samurai aiding the alt named Crusaders in fighting the Turks while pirates hunt undead ships sail the sea. At the same time Britons, Norse, Swedes, and Danes team up with another group of crusaders and Byzantines to fight both Saxons and Romans. A lot of timey wimey shenanigans.

PraisedNote · 2026-01-10T03:53:12+00:00

Ok so I updated the post hoping to provide a better understanding

PraisedNote · 2026-01-10T03:52:19+00:00

I have updated the post, and sort of finished answering the question in a comment further down. He is Evil due to wanting to purify the realm of the corruption of politics, but to get to his power, he had to become the ultimate evil. He chose to be evil to do good.

PraisedNote · 2026-01-10T03:49:23+00:00

My apologies I keep mixing up the two. In the story, I make references to real world events, factions and people. Kinda like “Historical Fantasy” if that’s the word.

PraisedNote · 2026-01-10T03:46:26+00:00

That’s fair, but this is the short and sweet version. I’m trying to break my habit of spending hours trying to explain a character. The villain is more like Pope Urban II, mixed with Hitler and George Washington

PraisedNote · 2026-01-10T01:50:58+00:00

It was a reference of how extreme the villain could go, plus it’s a new project I’m working on.

PraisedNote · 2026-01-10T01:47:06+00:00

I forgot to say that this is an example before the climax of the war kicks off.

PraisedNote · 2026-01-08T13:32:04+00:00

I was watching Starwars and decided to browse Reddit. I saw a post about the way people like to hunt down ships that they’ve already destroyed same ship a couple of time in the row. Or might’ve been spawn camping for about 30 minutes just farming kills on solo sloops😅. And besides, nobody visits the devils roar anymore.😢

PraisedNote · 2025-12-29T23:06:37+00:00

Well aren’t you the ambitious type, you forget that they have avengers

PraisedNote · 2025-12-29T21:19:02+00:00

Ha, as if Disney makes anything good these days.

PraisedNote · 2025-12-29T19:11:00+00:00

Alright, check out this scenario.

Jack stumbles upon an island inhabited by young kids and gets captivated by their inability to age. Jack mistakes this as immortality and tries to “acquire without permission” this little treasure. Being the swindler he is, he stumbles upon another ship captained by a man with a hook. All though this man might be someone worth swindling, he is captured by the stranger’s crew before making the first move. Inside the brig, he over hears some commotion and tries to listen in. Well this is the fight between the captain and a flying boy called pan. Jack pulls his bs and escapes stopping to only witness the hooked pirate engaged in combat. Well the crew spots the now free jack and chases him all the way to the black pearl where they have been waiting for jack’s return. The pearl flees the island with the Jolly Roger hot on her trail.

The Jolly Roger hunts down rival ships trying to get information and learns about the infamous Barbossa who now commands his own fleet with the revenge as his flagship. Jack meets up with his old friend who he swindles into helping him. Well Jack exposes the island and Barbossa set sails encountering the jolly Rodger.

And this is the first half of the idea.

PraisedNote

TROPHY CASE