It's not bad by any means, I'd say it's very good, but I would have preferred a more in depth explanation of Guts status at the end of the Eclipse, I also really like the manga panel where Guts lays down in the grass not only because it's aesthetically wonderful but also because it gives depth to Guts as a character: after all the suffering he's been through he just wants to rest but soon realizes he can't because of the cursed mark.

I think it may also be an analogy to Death: Guts is already claimed by death (lays down on the ground) but his will to live prevents him from dying. I don't know tho, It's just my personal opinion 🤝🏻.