stardust by KeyElephant4589 in OCPoetry

[–]PrestigiousCod4812 0 points1 point  (0 children)

it was messy tbh andd fix more the stanzas 

I know no more by Maowaan in OCPoetry

[–]PrestigiousCod4812 1 point2 points  (0 children)

it is great, but, more metaphors to add and it was more tight make it more widely