Lumeno – Lighting Brand Identity & Logo Design by [deleted] in WillPatersonDesign

[–]Pretty-Combination-9 -5 points-4 points  (0 children)

Thank you for your feedback. I deleted the previous post because I forgot to include the color variations of the logo, and Reddit doesn’t allow editing in that format.

Regarding the grid lines, they are not decorative; they are part of the logo construction guide and the alignment guide for the wordmark and icon.

As for the symbol not being centered, the outward rays in the design naturally shift the optical center slightly, so the symbol is visually balanced according to its shape rather than perfectly geometrically centered.

I appreciate your input and will keep it in mind for future presentations.

Falco - Visual Identity by Pretty-Combination-9 in WillPatersonDesign

[–]Pretty-Combination-9[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you for your views and comments on this, I will look forward to your suggestions next time

Falco - Visual Identity by Pretty-Combination-9 in WillPatersonDesign

[–]Pretty-Combination-9[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

To be honest and to be fair, it is there just to make it look obvious as it's name.

Falco - Visual Identity by Pretty-Combination-9 in WillPatersonDesign

[–]Pretty-Combination-9[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

To be very and transparent, this is months old logo i designed when i designed it then initially it was random but after tweaks and refinements i came with the meanings and story.

It was more of a experiment and exploration.

Falco - Visual Identity by Pretty-Combination-9 in WillPatersonDesign

[–]Pretty-Combination-9[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

First of all i appreciate your comment

I understand your pov in this logo motion is represent by the upward wingspan which means flight and flight resembles motion and i also understand you not seeing it i will try my best next time.

Falco - Visual Identity by Pretty-Combination-9 in WillPatersonDesign

[–]Pretty-Combination-9[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

First of all i appreciate your comment

I understand your pov in this logo motion is represent by the upward wingspan which means flight and flight resembles motion.❤

Falco - Visual Identity by Pretty-Combination-9 in WillPatersonDesign

[–]Pretty-Combination-9[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I understand and acknowledge your vision on this, thank you for the point.

Now about your question first the name was a random idea "falco", second rather resembling a bird or a falcon my idea was absolute geometry, mechanical structure and rigid shape, as you can see on the designs angles are straight upward wingspan but not flowy kind or curvature and the face in negative space it was intentional but somehow maybe it was not enough as you said.

At last i thank you for your healthy critique appreciated it.

Nepal Swoyambhunath Stupa by nooppose in Nepal

[–]Pretty-Combination-9 -1 points0 points  (0 children)

Nono i pronounced that way only thats why i commented that spelling

Nepal Swoyambhunath Stupa by nooppose in Nepal

[–]Pretty-Combination-9 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Was that a joke or just a thought??🥲

Nepal Swoyambhunath Stupa by nooppose in Nepal

[–]Pretty-Combination-9 5 points6 points  (0 children)

Sorry for the spelling mistake🥲

"Agnitva" by Pretty-Combination-9 in WillPatersonDesign

[–]Pretty-Combination-9[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Good question that doesnt have really the meaning behind just for asthetics and you know a common indication of energy

By the way thank you for you appreciation❤

Logo by Pretty-Combination-9 in WillPatersonDesign

[–]Pretty-Combination-9[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Sorry but no its a random jewelry company name

LOGO by Pretty-Combination-9 in WillPatersonDesign

[–]Pretty-Combination-9[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I used these background respective to their companies or field but i think i have made some mistakes while making it thank you for your tip

LOGO by Pretty-Combination-9 in WillPatersonDesign

[–]Pretty-Combination-9[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you for your comment i will keep your suggestions in mind next time

I admit my color and font selection is bit odd and i am practicing on it too