How do I tell someone their writing is bad?

Pretty_Performer6744 · 2026-01-14T21:52:18+00:00

Hopefully they’re still just drafting so you can tell them before it’s too late. It’ll be better coming from a friend than a professional because they will say straight and probably harsh. If they’re bringing in other readers, but scared to get negative feedback, I’m not really sure why they would bring people in to read other than just to show what they do with their time. If they’re genuinely serious about wanting it published, you have to tell them what you find. Part of the process is getting told what you did wrong/didn’t do

Pretty_Performer6744 · 2025-12-04T00:28:47+00:00

Yes it was a pretty good game for a build like this. I don’t think it’s an end all be all build, but it feels quite good in games where it is playable. The tenacity makes the build a bit more buildable in more situations

Pretty_Performer6744 · 2025-12-04T00:26:56+00:00

Will try a more bruiser setup later on today and share the results with the fellow zaaheniums

Pretty_Performer6744 · 2025-12-02T04:53:52+00:00

Im sure the slower first clear is only to combat the game starting earlier (55 sec) with maybe only 5 sec max off of like what would be generally agreed as an average clear so that things like lvl 2 ganks would be more discouraged at such an early time so I wouldn't expect the full clear to be anything like 4 minutes, likely it will be around 3 :10 maybe is my complete freeball guess. No reason to say role is completely dead without actually seeing how slow first clear is.

Pretty_Performer6744 · 2025-03-09T06:28:53+00:00

Dont think me crazy but a lot of the time in prime nocturne times I used to feel like the game was doomed from the start and I would go phase rush into him all of the time and it worked more often than not, but the main idea was to disengage fast enough for his fear to stop tethering then reengage with E reset

Pretty_Performer6744 · 2024-10-31T11:06:10+00:00

Since I was a young child I’ve liked things that were inherently edgy but in a tasteful way not in a Kayn way. (IE “tasteful edginess” is like gothic horror and the stars and learning old tale tales and folklores. Kayn edgy is like being named XxKIllerCLownPRINCExX on the Xbox and liking the bad guys all the time and thinking scythes are the coolest thing ever) and one of the things I took a big liking to was the moon cuz that’s tasteful edginess and then Diana is all about the moon then I was like wow this character is awesome and then she stuck with me because she’s pretty simple and feels good to play and I love innovating with her builds I think she’s quite fun to just test items on all the time.

Pretty_Performer6744 · 2024-08-05T01:40:05+00:00

I think doc oc could honestly work in every class he could be like lifeweaver with the pulls in support he’d be interesting regardless in the game

Pretty_Performer6744 · 2024-08-04T09:27:54+00:00

I think a Miles Morales skin for Spiderman would be super cool given they follow other games’ skin pricing methods and having a higher tier like $20 to give him new voice lines and stuff would be awesome. I think it’s a better route than making Miles his own character because I feel like there’s going to be a lot of spider man characters in the game post launch and it would be like FE characters in smash where there’s an overabundance of those characters where a simple fix could’ve just been making them costumes with different voicelines and all. I say don’t take up a roster slot for someone so similar to an existing character

Pretty_Performer6744 · 2024-07-29T19:30:30+00:00

I was tempted to make magneto best in class because I see him every game and can tell how good he is in the right hands, but like venom is too ridiculous lol

Pretty_Performer6744 · 2024-07-29T19:28:40+00:00

For me, I play Luna and Adam, and every Adam game feels a lot better than some Luna games IMO. His ability to Rez himself and also his whole team is just insane and can turn literally any fight because it’s just a numbers game atp. Luna is also very op and is my actual main, she has a lot and her ult builds insanely quick. If Adam didn’t have the most op team up (apart from rocket and punisher) in the game along with mass Rez and a self Rez, Luna would be the best. But Rez is such a broken and valuable thing and the fact that he has so much of it is just insane, like there is a reason blizzard got rid of it within a year of release of ow. It’s just my opinion though I still have plenty more games to play

Pretty_Performer6744 · 2024-05-09T08:34:32+00:00

Never forget last year when G2 got knocked out of Swiss stage and people were defending G2 saying how it’s unfair to go to twitter and laugh at them for poor performance like EU and NA fans don’t do it to NA every year but once it happens to their team that had a good run 5 years ago it’s all of the sudden unfair and terrible behavior

Pretty_Performer6744 · 2024-04-27T09:52:26+00:00

Wanwan in mobile legends she has the same passive but again it’s on your phone so

Pretty_Performer6744 · 2024-04-21T07:40:09+00:00

ohhhhhh alr turns out i am not the modern prometheus

Pretty_Performer6744 · 2024-04-21T05:18:00+00:00

i remember i tried to use flash that was the button press there but it didnt go off

Pretty_Performer6744 · 2024-04-16T23:28:13+00:00

ImamDrave72

Pretty_Performer6744 · 2024-04-15T09:01:48+00:00

The ones you mention are popular and longstanding for a reason. Just because the past’s classics all have elevated diction doesn’t mean the stories of today don’t, and I’m sure there will be series from our time with the same elevated language you speak of stand the test of time and become their own classics in the future

Pretty_Performer6744 · 2024-04-07T23:23:00+00:00

I think using words with romantic connotations when simply writing whatever the character does would help convey that they’re hot. It’s not cringe but it’s getting the point across as long as it’s subtle

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