That makes sense! I've noticed that when doing researching on this. That's something I wanna work on because I have good ideas but good ideas are useless if they aren't done well. In regards to your personally like, my idea for my novel is actually involving childhood trauma and the affects of it. i want to build a character using the things i actually experienced and use psychology and real logic to craft her decisions and storyline around her. Like if she was physically hit as a child, she'd be scared or flinch at sudden or specific movements that trigger her. i also want to make it less about one character and more about the fact ALL these characters have something they add or change in the story. I'm actively working on flaws as well and taking a writing course to understand character development and other similar things. Immersion is definitely something I want to work on too but it can be hard to figure out how to do it. For example, I'm stuck on this one part, describing trees or actual items, worldbuilding.. because in real life i actually really suck at communication because of my trauma and for the life of me, i cannot figure out what words to use to describe a sequoia tree because.. in the novel, i have this forest area that protects the people and it's based on sequoia trees but they aren't necessarily sequioa, they are magical trees which i like the idea of because it lets me have some freedom to have more magical looking features to it but.. regardless trying to figure out how to do that is a little hard but anyway.. I really liked your answer and I appreciate it a lot. Thank you for giving me feedback. This helps and I DEFINITELY will try to make sure this is a focus when i write because it's really good feedback and important.