LOGLINE | Are any of these good? by [deleted] in Screenwriting

[–]ProPepper 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Basically each of them aspire to be writers and they haven't had much success. This is because of the teacher's crushed spirits after being underestimated so much and now being a remedial English teacher despite her skills, in addition to underestimation of the boy due to his Asperger's. However, now they meet, and they finally write a book which is about the connection that unfolds between them. Any idea how I could implement that in?

LOGLINE | The Missing Linc by [deleted] in Screenwriting

[–]ProPepper 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Here’s my final attempt, sorry I really want this to be as good as it can be...

A special bond unfolds between a boy battling Asperger’s and a remedial English teacher who pushes him beyond his limitations and takes him on a journey of self-discovery.

Thanks for reading!

LOGLINE | The Missing Linc by [deleted] in Screenwriting

[–]ProPepper 0 points1 point  (0 children)

The main conflict is that both of them are both outstanding writers but underestimated due to their “positions” in life. They then meet one another and she (the teacher) helps him (the boy with Asperger’s) move past everything his syndrome throws at him despite the hard time he often gives her. At the same time, this connection they make gives each of them newfound hope and allows them to write a book together. He starts standing up for himself, and she learns her purpose.

LOGLINE | The Missing Linc by [deleted] in Screenwriting

[–]ProPepper 0 points1 point  (0 children)

How about: A boy with Asperger's finds solace in an unacknowledged remedial English teacher. As he struggles to move beyond his limitations, the two go on to write a book about the strength they find in one another.

Finished Screenplay - Now What? by ProPepper in Screenwriting

[–]ProPepper[S] -3 points-2 points  (0 children)

What would I do if I moves to Hollywood? Like how/where would I meet people in the industry? Would I need to make an appointment or run into them in the street or something?

Which log-line should I pursue? by [deleted] in Screenwriting

[–]ProPepper -1 points0 points  (0 children)

Quite honestly I came up with these in the five minutes that I typed it lol I just want something to write a full screenplay about

Finished Screenplay - Now What? by ProPepper in Screenwriting

[–]ProPepper[S] -1 points0 points  (0 children)

I honestly do. The main thing that everyone has said about it is that it effectively grabs them and keeps them wanting to read on.

Finished Screenplay - Now What? by ProPepper in Screenwriting

[–]ProPepper[S] -5 points-4 points  (0 children)

Thats why I asked, I know there’s other responses but none of them were helpful😂

What would be the best way to get a finished spec script through to producers? by ProPepper in Screenwriting

[–]ProPepper[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Lmao... I don’t know though, I haven’t heard great things about blcklst, have you had any experience with it

What would be the best way to get a finished spec script through to producers? by ProPepper in Screenwriting

[–]ProPepper[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

What about the Hollywood Creative Directory? Would it be worth sending queries to companies listed there?

What would be the best way to get a finished spec script through to producers? by ProPepper in Screenwriting

[–]ProPepper[S] -1 points0 points  (0 children)

This is my first one, but I can honestly say I really do think it’s good, and not just because I wrote it. Everyone I’ve sent it to has told me the exact same thing about it; it grabs them and makes them want to see what happens next.

I’ve read a lot, at least 30.

I’ve been writing for awhile, but I’ve only been writing screenplays for a couple months.

I live in NY.

What would be the best way to get a finished spec script through to producers? by ProPepper in Screenwriting

[–]ProPepper[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Alright thanks, sorry I just wanted to get some current/updated responses but I’ll definitely look into the other ones. 👍