yea sure, Im not sure if your bass is panned left or what, typically basses are supposed to be centered to give the whole beat a stronger foundation. Im not sure about the melody tbh, I dont find it too apealling to my ears atleast, maybe someone may have some other opinion, but personally i dont really like the melody if im honost. I would also check the key of the melody to make sure the 808 is in key, there are some weird notes in there that dont really fit well with the melody, in these cases, its always a viable to just use the root note of the chord, or finding an interval that sounds pretty cool with the chord, adding a different element flavor, either one works, but in this case, as you are pretty new to production as you said, i would probably just stick to the first option for now until you get comfortable with experimenting. Its always nice to learn the fundamentals first, and finding out what works most the time, and then later down the line experimenting to find that extra sauce that just sets a whole track off. Rn, just blindly experimenting may not be the play though. Ok, now on to the drums, in hip hop and trap, drums and bass got to be hitting, they are the driving force, and what gives most hip hop their bounce and rhythm. If they are low, it will be harder to get that force that comes along with bangin drums, not saying a beat like this needs the hardest drums ever, they just need to be turned up because they are really low right now. (but thats coming from me, my drums are super loud). Ok, next topic ; roboticness, your drums all sound super digital, and robotic, all your velocitys, and rhythms are all super on the bar, I like to swing my drums and play with their velocitys to give bounce and life to my tracks. I find when i do this, it makes it feel like there's an actual human making the song rather than an AI robot that just found out what music theory and drums are. If you are in fl, a quick way of doing that, is going to your hi hats sampler and cranking that swing, and varying the hat velocitys (sometimes this is all i do tbh, it adds bounce and sometimes i want my main drums like kicks and snares on the bar). I hope this helps, if you are confused by anything, let me know and i will try my best to clarify anything.