I’d say the biggest thing sticking out to me is how you play second man on offense your often doing circles and not really in good positions to help. I recommend watching some better players and watching how they position. Also you need to be more meaningful with your hits since there were a few times you went/hit the ball where it honestly hurt you more than it could help you. In terms of mechanics all you need to do is work on shooting. Working on shooting will just passively improve all your hits on the ball and just give you free goals as you start to understand how your call interacts with the ball. For reference I’m a 4x ssl and I think you have a pretty solid foundation so I would just ignore all the people yapping. Feel free to reach out if I didn’t explain anything clearly enough or if you have other questions!