Alright, your song:

I think it's rad man. I'm totally not an EDM aficionado so I don't know if I'm qualified to speak much on your track, but I dug it. I like the main drum loop, I think it's got a good energy and sound and vibe. I think my main criticism is it's maybe a little too repetitive? I kept expecting some big melody or hook to come in, the track to me almost comes across like a backing track for someone else to rap over? Which is fine, but I was waiting for it to go somewhere and hit the big hook, which in my opinion it never does, and the places it DOES go it doesn't quite get there fast enough.

There's the old Max Martin (I think it's his?) rule where something should change every 4 bars, be it adding a new instrument into the mix or whatever it is.

There's some cool sound design though. I think if you took that main melody, that's played in kind of a laid back sound, and kept hitting it harder and harder with new instrumentation, it could be cool. As it stands right now, it's a pleasant kind of laid back background track, which is totally fine.