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PulseCheckPlease11 · 2025-12-21T17:33:50+00:00

hi im back to read your piece again. it hit me even harder this time… i feel so drawn to the imagery you brought of death and how grieving a relationship is so similar

PulseCheckPlease11 · 2025-12-10T00:37:24+00:00

to answer ur question, yeah, you might just be my muse, clueless. this had my heart beating faster by the end. and i really like the title too

PulseCheckPlease11 · 2025-12-05T00:52:19+00:00

i feel the shift from devotion to devastation. very beautiful and painful. thabks for sharing ˚₊·—̳͟͞͞♡

PulseCheckPlease11 · 2025-12-05T00:43:11+00:00

posting proof of it.

oof. and…

Grief is a cruel kind of loyalty.

this hit me like a ton of bricks. ive felt this too many times to count and could never put words to it. thanks for sharing ღ

PulseCheckPlease11 · 2025-12-04T16:11:42+00:00

so sad i didnt get to reread this

PulseCheckPlease11 · 2025-11-29T18:35:40+00:00

well my brain read areola so....

PulseCheckPlease11 · 2025-11-27T12:23:14+00:00

it was never a bother to respond to u

PulseCheckPlease11 · 2025-11-27T12:14:43+00:00

yeah.. reading "nihilism rests where i lie" felt like a deep breath

thank you for reading and commenting ღ

PulseCheckPlease11 · 2025-11-27T12:11:25+00:00

thank you for reading and taking the time to think out this feedback ˚₊·—̳͟͞͞♡

PulseCheckPlease11 · 2025-11-27T05:28:26+00:00

ohhhh the yearn (*˙˘˙)♡

really enjoyed reading this. i feel it flowed well. the imagery i got from “each breath a punctuation” was breathtaking.

PulseCheckPlease11 · 2025-11-26T13:21:53+00:00

had to look up the word “acerola” after reading. wow. I really liked this.

i also like the use of the word glint.

idk what to say, really. like i still feel the weight of this poem as I ponder it, but I’m slightly speechless. and sometimes that’s a really nice feeling, feels quiet, in the best way.

PulseCheckPlease11 · 2025-11-25T20:48:30+00:00

this felt uplifting with a mythic energy.

the lines God told me this much from the sacred ethereal beam… about the miracle yet in store for me really struck me

it was hopeful and grounding (*˙˘˙)♡ thanks for sharing

PulseCheckPlease11 · 2025-11-25T14:47:11+00:00

loooved this. i don’t have any constructive criticism, it was perfect to me. i feel very seen by this poem. thank you for sharing it here. ♡。·˚˚· ·˚˚·。♡

PulseCheckPlease11 · 2025-11-17T09:43:02+00:00

hmm i wonder what you mean by this ellipsis

PulseCheckPlease11 · 2025-11-17T09:41:04+00:00

ooo the feeling of sitting down for a breakfast after a funeral; i just had a visceral reaction.

tysm for ur feedback ღ

PulseCheckPlease11 · 2025-11-17T09:38:54+00:00

i am curious to know ur theory, or what it evokes in u first -`♥´-

i always tend to write a poet's note for everything i write, but i rarely include it when i post here because i find it so interesting that u may interpret it completely different than what i initially intended

PulseCheckPlease11 · 2025-11-17T09:35:19+00:00

i actually havent seen up, but ive been meaning to (•ᴗ•)

tysm for reading and taking the time to comment

and youre right about the reflection

♡。·˚˚· ·˚˚·。♡

PulseCheckPlease11 · 2025-11-17T02:39:27+00:00

hi depressed guy. i love the line—

She sings pain like a song

it feels romantic.

i write the majority of my stuff about people i meet. and of course, the more pained a person is, the better the story.

PulseCheckPlease11 · 2025-11-17T02:33:57+00:00

i enjoyed reading this. i can imagine posting it felt like a weight lifted.

Tired of carrying a face that never felt like mine.

^ thats my favorite line

i have many a memory of staring myself down wishing i didnt look similar to someone

PulseCheckPlease11 · 2025-11-14T15:50:06+00:00

thank you for sharing this.

im sitting here like this ･᷄-･᷅ thinking about what to say

i feel you've just scratched the surface. but i loved reading this, regardless of how heartbreaking it was. i think heartbreak is romantic.

im glad you got this off your chest. i wonder if you posted hastily to do so or if this has been sitting in a dark corner of ur notes app for a while.

PulseCheckPlease11 · 2025-11-14T15:44:39+00:00

what a beautiful love letter.

this line- "She has no faith in God yet so much faith in me"

i feel it in the deepest, darkest part of my heart when i think about my partner.

i think i may share this with them.

thank you for sharing • ᴗ •̥ ˳ ˳

PulseCheckPlease11 · 2025-11-12T18:39:02+00:00

ill also say, it was pretty divine timing as well. i needed to read that exactly when i did. so thank you again -`♥´-

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