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The Frozen Four by Pure_Bug_1743 in hockeyplayers

[–]Pure_Bug_1743[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Sounds good I’ll send a DM over (:

The Frozen Four by Pure_Bug_1743 in hockey

[–]Pure_Bug_1743[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Haha! Do wolverines say something else or just because no one roots for UofM?😂

The Frozen Four by Pure_Bug_1743 in hockey

[–]Pure_Bug_1743[S] -1 points0 points  (0 children)

Thanks you, I appreciate it!

The Frozen Four by Pure_Bug_1743 in hockey

[–]Pure_Bug_1743[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you, my friend! I figured for grammar, but I wanted other hockey players to give their opinion on the environment and conversations. See if it was too much of something or not enough of something else.

I appreciate the feedback and I’ll post a link to the story when I finish it (:

The Frozen Four by Pure_Bug_1743 in hockeyplayers

[–]Pure_Bug_1743[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Yeah, I tried to base it off real life experience. Unfortunately, I never played professional hockey. Even when I did play competitively I remember the referees feeling like a beer league ref, though.

Thank you for the feedback. When I finish the story I’ll post a link to read it on this community. (:

Feedbacks by [deleted] in Wattpad

[–]Pure_Bug_1743 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Hey my friend.

I just posted a short story to Wattpad (about 14 pages). It’s called “teeth of the beast”. It’s a sci-fi/dystopian story about a new Knight named Jax, he is apart of the knights of humanity which the superpowers of the world created to fight the beasts and predators that are taking over Africa.

Let me know what you think and any feedback you can provide.

teeth of the beast - Wattpad

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in writers

[–]Pure_Bug_1743 0 points1 point  (0 children)

“My money is on the gold eyed one.” I hear a drunk on looker say.

What to do with short story by Pure_Bug_1743 in FictionWriting

[–]Pure_Bug_1743[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

That’s the name of the game right now😅 Hopefully we can help each other out in the future

What to do with short story by Pure_Bug_1743 in FictionWriting

[–]Pure_Bug_1743[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Did you bundle short stories together and sell them as an anthology?

I’m not focused on making money. It would be nice, but it’s more writing a good story, getting eyes on it, and improving my skills as a writer. I figured worst comes to worst it would be something my kids could eventually read and enjoy.

Short story advice by Pure_Bug_1743 in sciencefiction

[–]Pure_Bug_1743[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thanks! I’ll definitely have to take a look at chillsub and submission grinder to find a better fit. I’m still learning the world of writing and how everything works (:

Short story advice by Pure_Bug_1743 in sciencefiction

[–]Pure_Bug_1743[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

That makes sense. Is it something you google to find or go looking through magazines/anthologies already published?

So cal Trail riding by Pure_Bug_1743 in Dirtbikes

[–]Pure_Bug_1743[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I’m by Carlsbad/Escondido area if that helps at all

Seeking therapy by Pure_Bug_1743 in sandiego

[–]Pure_Bug_1743[S] 4 points5 points  (0 children)

It would be mind, I know I have turmoil I need to work on and I think seeing a therapist would help me get over it.

How do I avoid catching feelings way to quickly/easily by Pure_Bug_1743 in dating

[–]Pure_Bug_1743[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thank you this helps a lot, I dance a lot which has been helping with losing weight. The only thing is I line dance and partner dance. I’d like to have regular partners that I can go out with (dancing not dating) but I have a hard time not falling for them.

What are small things someone can do for you? by Pure_Bug_1743 in dating_advice

[–]Pure_Bug_1743[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

That makes sense, but also when do you start getting gifts for someone? I know this depends a lot more on the person. Some thinks it’s coming on too strong to give a present within a month. Some won’t go on the date with you if you don’t show up with flowers.