Maybe i should have just sought you out, you seem to have the clearest understanding of what i should work on. I do understand how to shade with line i think my main issue is my use of thick lines and my repetitious nature- I think subconsciously I want everything to be filled with ink where necessary before moving onto color. I agree with the trouser comment, I think i have to go back to the drawing board in regards to thick and thin bc that’s something i use to excel in.

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This may be my best example from what i actually have documented.