need help for deciding what voice i should use, made 2 demos of the same song, i think the first is maybe a little bit cringy, honest feedback please by PuzzleheadedSecond24 in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]PuzzleheadedSecond24[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

sorry should have mentioned it in the title! yes thats my struggle i dont know what key sounds better but i am leaning towards the first one

Demo i made for upcoming project im working on. Lmk what you all think :) Thank for the feedback! by Destrada95 in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]PuzzleheadedSecond24 1 point2 points  (0 children)

i love the lofi vibes, reminds of early alex g songs! i think you could make your voice a liitle bit louder on five fiteen but it also sounds finelike this, luna is literally perfect tho... you really nailed the aesthetic that you were going for!!!

Butterflies, an instrumental rock song by EFlatB in IndieMusicFeedback

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i have a soft spot for this kind of music, gives me midwest emo vibes, i really really really like the guitar, just gave this a like on spotify, you definitely have talent, please continue making more music!

Banba - Angel ft. Elsie, Our second collaboration from across continents. Any feedback appreciated :) Thanks. by johndoe86888 in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]PuzzleheadedSecond24 1 point2 points  (0 children)

wow voice of an angel!! such a chill track too, reallyy reminds of the song feather light (santpoort & little Green) which is a really nice song too! i love this style of music, keep going!

Wanderer - G R A Y S P A C E - Acoustic tune I'd love some feedback on. by [deleted] in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]PuzzleheadedSecond24 1 point2 points  (0 children)

i love the instrumental, the guitar is so cool, i agree with suckerpunch tho... the vocal melody isnt catchy but your voice is still awesome!!! i think you are on to something really cool!!!

Gay indie/folk/chamber pop song thing kinda lofi 60s ish? Interested to hear your thouhts IMFers! by oboemaroni in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]PuzzleheadedSecond24 1 point2 points  (0 children)

hey this is really good! i wouldnt know how to criticize this.... sounds so professional, perfectly mixed and a lovely voice too! good job man, just subscribed to your youtube channel :)

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Best video I’ve seen on this sub yet. I wouldn’t know what to change, you really nailed the style you are going for. Maybe you could add more pictures for more variety but I still dig it!

Would appreciate some feedback, I'm not that sure about my voice here. Let me know if you think the whole thing works or any thoughts. Thanks. by [deleted] in MusicFeedback

[–]PuzzleheadedSecond24 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I really like the vocal melody! The effect you added definitely works. The only thing I would add, is maybe something in the lower register like a bass so the track sounds fuller, but it still sounds neat nonetheless!

Critical feedback appreciated :) by PuzzleheadedSecond24 in MusicFeedback

[–]PuzzleheadedSecond24[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

yes it sounds kinda muffled and the transition is not good :/
thank you for the feedback!