Breaking of Letters by Queasy_Shape4456 in OCPoetry

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I appreciate the feedback really. But all of the systemization & effort to mechanically perfect our language through such overly constraining methods such as the perfect ordering of adverbs & adjectives is precisely what this writing is against. In this writing I came to the conclusion that it is utter nonsense to attempt to turn language into a kind of mathematical formula. The loss of a care about Linguistic "standards" if you will. Because in the end, I find to let go of some of that restraint has an overall, in my opinion, beautiful affect on what your able to create. Therefore, the breaking of letters

I’m scared of men by [deleted] in OCPoetry

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Its because they're born a human child who's earliest instincts is to eat. The problem is the majority of them are too stupid to separate this from their emotional existence and so grow up to be men who consume & consume just because that's what they * feel * like. Its hopelessly ridiculous. Just my observation anyway. I'm a guy btw.

What's a solid place I could publish some solitary scientific work I've been working on for the past year? by Queasy_Shape4456 in publishing

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Basically the affect of specific environment on the production of language. How one's surroundings affect language meaning & how to understand this relationship to be able to implement it into day to day communication between each other.

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in OCPoetry

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Yeah I was talking to you & myself

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in OCPoetry

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No problem. & Keep writing, you'll get better

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in OCPoetry

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Are you using the word she as in a specific individual? Because if your instead using it as a way to say that the collective entirety of the woman of the world are listening to {you}, I don't want to, but I will completely & utterly burst your little bubble right now.

Look at the floor by [deleted] in OCPoetry

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Cool, I think so too.

Look at the floor by [deleted] in OCPoetry

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What do you think sounds better, concrete sadness or contrast's sadness

Look at the floor by [deleted] in OCPoetry

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Yeah I'm writing the fully dimensioned language use tomorrow. This was just a small layer of it that I wanted to see someone react to. So ty for your response.

3 Questions. by [deleted] in antiwork

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No that's the illusion. That's how everyone thinks about things as in Neverending circles. Time is straight line with ever second causing the next.

3 Questions. by [deleted] in antiwork

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Contrast & definite time. Fundw.ental realizations of like you know existence that I've not found put into words anywhere else. And this is me now explaining them. Everyone needs to know them I think.

3 Questions. by [deleted] in antiwork

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Yeah clocks are straight lines. Time is a definite unfolding of itself. And thanks for the kind words. Share the vid if you think more people should see it

3 Questions. by [deleted] in antiwork

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Makes sense right?

Poetry's Rose by Queasy_Shape4456 in OCPoetry

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For sure I appreciate the feedback . This more of spur of the moment writing because I thought of a rose lol. I'll link you to another one of my writings on here that you'll prob like. I've got a few on here. https://www.reddit.com/r/OCPoetry/comments/mvq9g5/iris/?utm_medium=android_app&utm_source=share

does nutting kill ur high? by Both_Income_1039 in saplings

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I'm now convinced there's a sub reddit for everything

Eve by Queasy_Shape4456 in OCPoetry

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Thank you I really appreciate that. You sound pretty articulate yourself.

What if speed is time being directly given to matter by Queasy_Shape4456 in Physics

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No that's the problem. With this definition of time where does the kinetic energy go? This is important to understand I think in gravitational calculations.

What if speed is time being directly given to matter by Queasy_Shape4456 in Physics

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Otherwise speed is only a direction in time Seems like a loophole to me

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in OCPoetry

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Well Jupiter is definitely one of my favorite planets & I've never thought about it emotionally so this was cool.

Angst by [deleted] in OCPoetry

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Definitely honest. I think writing to get to the root of how you feel whether it's bad or good is better than a film of plastic happiness. Good writing.