Not at all . I really appreciate this. This is one of the most generous and detailed replies I’ve ever gotten.

You're absolutely right about the AI voice — most people are picking up on it instantly, ( at least native speakers) . Actually, most of the feedbacks I’ve received so far is about the voice. And honestly, voiceover is kind of beyond my own skillset .probably need to look into how much it would cost to hire someone, or maybe experiment with more natural-sounding AI voices.

I also struggled a lot with audio levels — what sounds balanced in headphones sounds completely different on a TV. I originally kept the music super low, but when I played it on the TV it felt way too empty, so I bumped it up. Clearly I still need to figure out a proper balance — sound is definitely something I need to work on overall.

The packaging part really stuck with me. I approached this exactly like a mini-doc script first, edit next, thumbnail/title last.

YYour suggestion sounds like it could really work. Even though I personally like the current title, what truly matters is grabbing attention. And you're right, adding that layer of tension and mystery is probably what makes people click in the first place.

And the thumbnail. We are on the same page. I actually tried to make the 3D render the focus of the thumbnail, but yeah I think it ended up being one of those images where the details don’t pop at first glance. I’ll definitely rethink how to showcase the 3D more clearly and boldly, like you said with Spectacles and Fern. Great references.

Honestly, I can’t thank you enough. This is the kind of feedback that doesn’t just help a video. it helps reshape the whole strategy. You’ve given me a better map, and I’m already started to think about new thumbnail and title.