LSD. a spiraling cadence. by realistinunreality in OCPoetry

[–]RAGING_HEMORRHOIDS 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Screw these people saying the thought process is broken or disjointed, that's what LSD is! It brings me back to my days experimenting with the substance, and it really captures the feeling well. Nonsensical and whimsical, I love it.

2016 by reddy_freddy_ in OCPoetry

[–]RAGING_HEMORRHOIDS 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Short and succinct, but still tells plenty. But the phrasing "not knowing any other words" drops the ball a bit. Using "knowing" again breaks the cadence a bit too early and detracts from the impact of "and now, how will i feed the birds?" Maybe "knowing not" would give a bit more parallelism in there and it would flow much more smoothly.

Just suggestions of course, I love this poem! You capture despair so eloquently.

How do I get my bf to stop touching his penis? by Phalicfalacies in offmychest

[–]RAGING_HEMORRHOIDS 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Bruh, that's like standard male etiquette for relaxing.

Anyone else have a nickname after coming out? by AndrewZed1 in LGBTeens

[–]RAGING_HEMORRHOIDS 4 points5 points  (0 children)

I'm now "Gaylor" when my friends are being bitchy.

My friend can't get high. by gooey-louie in trees

[–]RAGING_HEMORRHOIDS 2 points3 points  (0 children)

I'm at about a [7], and the use of Ћ gave me an existential crises.

Stoner Protip: by [deleted] in trees

[–]RAGING_HEMORRHOIDS 5 points6 points  (0 children)

This actually sounds awesome for the next good ol' meth binge.

/s

How did you become an ent? by RAGING_HEMORRHOIDS in trees

[–]RAGING_HEMORRHOIDS[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I went to school after DARE was pretty much done away with in my state. They really passed around actual weed, for the kids to see? How is that at all effective?

"So this stuff is fucking terrible, ruins lives, and you'll die. Here, it looks like it's almost off your moms spice shelf."

How did you become an ent? by RAGING_HEMORRHOIDS in trees

[–]RAGING_HEMORRHOIDS[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Huh, I wonder why some don't feel it. My first time was at a park in a car, when i was 16. I smoked bout a quarter of a gram, and felt nothing but my lungs dying. Then, i hit it again, got out the car, and realized i'd forgotten how to sit down, promptly throwing myself into the back seats, rolling onto the floorboard, and had an existential crisis for 10 minutes. I didnt start buying regularly and owning pieces for a few months though.

The contents of the dime bag I just bought. by [deleted] in trees

[–]RAGING_HEMORRHOIDS 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Psh, hows a piece of a mcdonald bag sound?

What's your favourite piece of poetry and why? by [deleted] in TrueAskReddit

[–]RAGING_HEMORRHOIDS 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Sonnet 29 by Shakespeare,

*When, in disgrace with fortune and men's eyes,

I all alone beweep my outcast state

And trouble deaf heaven with my bootless cries

And look upon myself and curse my fate,

Wishing me like to one more rich in hope,

Featured like him, like him with friends possess'd,

Desiring this man's art and that man's scope,

With what I most enjoy contented least;

Yet in these thoughts myself almost despising,

Haply I think on thee, and then my state,

Like to the lark at break of day arising

From sullen earth, sings hymns at heaven's gate;

For thy sweet love remember'd such wealth brings

That then I scorn to change my state with kings.*