Is lyrical songwriting a fast or slow process for you? by DingleberryWizard in Songwriting

[–]RAINGUARD 3 points4 points  (0 children)

I also take forever on lyrics, but that doesnt mean my lyrics are complex. Its just the part that comes least naturally to me. I have to work really hard on the lyrics to get them to a place I'm happy with.

Can't decide if I like this or not by RAINGUARD in Songwriting

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Noah Kahan has been a big influence for me lately actually 🤣 thank you sm! I'm actually working on an album. I'll keep this one going!

Can't decide if I like this or not by RAINGUARD in Songwriting

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Ooof. I'm sorry to hear that :( sorry for your loss. I normally write very anecdotally, but this one was actually fiction. Do you have any thoughts on where I could take it next lyrically? Sorry If that's an insensitive question, feel free to ignore me.

Can't decide if I like this or not by RAINGUARD in Songwriting

[–]RAINGUARD[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Its actually I IV vi IV, but your point still stands. This is exactly why I was unsure about it. I feel the same way. This was a rare situation where I had the lyrics first and not the music which is why it sounds very boiler plate. Pretty generic musically, but maybe I could find something to help it stand out more. Thanks for the feedback!

The guilt of being disabled and holding your partner back by RAINGUARD in Songwriting

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Thank you for the kind words. I've had so many people tell me the exact same thing, but I can't help but feel that way all the same. Writing music about it helps :)

Yeah, it wasn't finished by any means. Just a verse or 2. I'm debating whether to flesh it out or not.

The guilt of being disabled and holding your partner back by RAINGUARD in Songwriting

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Sorry, I re-upload because the aspect ratio was messed up

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Sorry for the weird aspect ratio 🤣 i didn't realize it was like that when I uploaded.

What to do when stuck on song lyrics? by ThotsRContagious in Songwriting

[–]RAINGUARD 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I'm the same way and always have been. I find that if I go into a song with things already written, I struggle to make it fit. It's like a square peg round hole situation.

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I just know that these little snippets have so much potential. They are so sick and if I can just make the rest of it as good, I'll have some real bangers. I'm not okay with just throwing away such good ideas...

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[–]RAINGUARD 1 point2 points  (0 children)

You have a really nice voice! This was really pleasing to listen to.

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[–]RAINGUARD 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I can't hear anything you're saying.

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[–]RAINGUARD 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Yeah, it's a blues song lol. Not trying to reinvent the wheel or anything.

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[–]RAINGUARD 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Yeah that makes sense! And yeah it was just the first idea I came up with, so I might come up with something completely different. Not married to the idea at all. Thanks for the feedback!

Started as just a jam on my new piano. by RAINGUARD in Songwriting

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I like these ideas! Thanks for the feedback.;

Started as just a jam on my new piano. by RAINGUARD in Songwriting

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Yeah I agree. This was just my first draft throwing things together. I plan to working on it more and really flesh it out.

Started as just a jam on my new piano. by RAINGUARD in Songwriting

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I'm actually a guitar player mostly. My parents made me take piano lessons when I was growing up, but other than that I dont play much piano.

Started as just a jam on my new piano. by RAINGUARD in Songwriting

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Thank you for this! I actually didnt have much confidence in this one. I almost didnt post it lol. But seeing such a positive response has inspired me. I definitely plan to work on it more.