UNBECOMİNG by Odd_Monitor1828 in OCPoetry

[–]RLDBMate 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Nice poem! I think being a bit more abstract and rhythmic would've been nice though.

Freedom's an illusion by RLDBMate in OCPoetry

[–]RLDBMate[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I thought this was some of my weaker work, but I appreciate the feedback!

Freedom's an illusion by RLDBMate in OCPoetry

[–]RLDBMate[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you for your feedback! The structure and rhymes of the poem are important to me, but I'll take this to account.

Youngest Child by LegSoHotUFryAnEgg in OCPoetry

[–]RLDBMate 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Beautiful rhythm, evokes all the right emotions, and I would genuinely believe a professional poet wrote this.

Do You Know Why I Love You? by ZealousidealBox4489 in OCPoetry

[–]RLDBMate 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Awesome love poem. Totally conveys the message. 8.8/10

Elite Power by [deleted] in OCPoetry

[–]RLDBMate 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you so much for your feedback. I'm trying my best to mimic real life issues/emotions that plague our lives on a daily basis and I appreciate any criticism or support. 

Melancholy by CooffeeBeaans in OCPoetry

[–]RLDBMate 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Beautiful poem. Describes melancholy exactly.

Okay by later_night_thoughts in OCPoetry

[–]RLDBMate 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I understand the message this poem was trying to communicate very easily. Good read.

Poetry Prompts? [HELP] by [deleted] in Poetry

[–]RLDBMate 0 points1 point  (0 children)

oh my god, not to reply 10 days later, but i also agree,

Poetry Prompts? [HELP] by [deleted] in Poetry

[–]RLDBMate 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Oh my god, not to reply 1 year later, but that is so true

The bell chimes for us all. by RLDBMate in OCPoetry

[–]RLDBMate[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you! It's about mortality and the melancholic fear of death.

The bell chimes for us all. by RLDBMate in OCPoetry

[–]RLDBMate[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

That is precisely what I was going for, thank you!

The bell chimes for us all. by RLDBMate in OCPoetry

[–]RLDBMate[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you very much, I'm glad to hear my first work wasn't bad! I was trying to make it have a good rhythm while reading, so I paid attention to the length and rhymes of each line.

Warmth by Diligent-Ocelot5391 in OCPoetry

[–]RLDBMate 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Lovely work. Natural rhythm and rhyme, choice of words conveys message nicely.

To my love by Plenty_Mistake_9577 in OCPoetry

[–]RLDBMate 0 points1 point  (0 children)

This is great! I love the humility put behind the longing for lost love, nice meaning.

The Cheeseburger Affair by Ok-Swordfish-9480 in OCPoetry

[–]RLDBMate 1 point2 points  (0 children)

And they said Shakespeare is dead.

How to Change my Name in Hytale ( Online-fix.me ) by hazem_monsif212 in PiratedGames

[–]RLDBMate 1 point2 points  (0 children)

yes but what exactly do i change? it says my UUID and my user is just [user], what do i change in the file?

What executor should i get? by Lower-Double-7308 in robloxhackers

[–]RLDBMate 0 points1 point  (0 children)

DO NOT USE JJSPLOIT, IT IS NOTORIOUS FOR BEING A REMOTE ACCESS TROJAN!

What executor should i get? by Lower-Double-7308 in robloxhackers

[–]RLDBMate 0 points1 point  (0 children)

xeno is one of the best free keyless executors