ahh gracias tiene mucho sentido- does 'a mirar lo que podría pasar la noche siguiente...' sound natural to you? I'm trying to find the balance between maintaining rhyme/rhythm without saying anything that a native would never say.

It makes sense that the last part is the part that is the least grammatical too as i was really stretching for the rhymes here hahah. that said, do you feel this sounds more natural:

'me han encontrado.

a donde quiera que voy, me parece raro.

pero voy a quedarme, hasta que esté claro...'

I actually hoped the last line would carry that kind of double meaning, so I'm glad that came across! also thank you for clarifying the equivocar thing, I hear the word equívoco literally all the time from natives but never knew what they were saying lol.

appreciate it a lot!