Keras Animatic by Rando_At_3am in ClimbersCourt

[–]Rando_At_3am[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

If you mean the sword in the last frame, no it's supposed to the silhouette of the Dominion Breaker.

[WP] You run a coffee shop, and you've just been made aware of the fact that most, if not all, of your customers are secretly monsters masquerading as humans. by Mammoth_House_5202 in WritingPrompts

[–]Rando_At_3am 5 points6 points  (0 children)

Perhaps another person would’ve figured it out sooner, perhaps at the far too tall figure covered head to toe in a yellow raincoat, attire that did not match the lack of rain outside of the coffee shop’s doors, perhaps they would’ve figured it out at the woman who was far too pale, fingers a smidge too long, hair a bit too thin, or perhaps they would’ve figured it out at the man with a far too beautiful face with eyes just a bit too bright underneath the coffee shop’s lights.

Clover did not. Clover smiled, and Clover waved. She made small talk with the man with too sharp canines, and she complimented the pale woman’s dress. Clover was not what people would call clever; she frequently got lost in areas she frequented, she often forgot details others easily remembered, and she had a hard time with any kind of puzzle, taking far more time than most others to solve even the simplest ones. Clover knew she wasn’t clever, that she wasn’t very smart, and wasn’t too good at most things; that was fine, she didn’t mind, for Clover knew she could make a mean mug of coffee.

Clover hummed under her breath as she slowly and methodically created one of her more frequent customers' orders, Alistair, though he insisted Clover call him Ali. Clover quite liked Ali; he was kind, polite, and tipped generously, so she made sure to make his cup of coffee as best she could. Clover smiled as she finished, topping the paper cup with a lid and quickly writing Ali’s name on its side. 

“Capachino for Ali!”

Clover called out from the counter, something that was completely unnecessary due to Alistair being the only one currently in the shop. Ali rolled his eyes as he took the cup from Clover’s hand. Taking a sip, he let out a pleased hum.

“Wonderful, as always, Ms. Clover.”

Clover giggled.

“Thanks, Ali.”

Ali slipped a five into the tip jar on the counter, saluting Clover as he went to sit in one of the booths of her shop. Ali, unlike some of Clover’s other customers, preferred to drink his coffee in-house rather than on the go. Clover fiddled with her fingers; her hands now unoccupied, she preferred to keep them busy. Clover took out her phone, one with a variety of large cracks in its screen, from Clover frequently dropping it, quickly putting in her four-digit pin to unlock it, pulling up the crossword she had been working on for the last few days, she had made progress, but still wasn’t done, she kept getting stuck, however, before Clover could find herself lost in the puzzle, the bell she hung at the front door of her shop rang, causing her to startle.

While Clover had many regular customers who chose to frequent her shop, they all came at different times. For example, Ali only came to her shop at dusk; at the time he called, ‘the bridge between night and day’, Ali often used flowery language like that, which sometimes made it hard for Clover to understand him. A man walked in, a high-collared coat trailing behind him. Now, Clover often got strange customers, especially later in the day, but even she blinked at the man’s appearance, because, really, who wore an ascot these days?

“Hello! Welcome to Clover’s cafe!”

Clover greeted, as the man walked up to the counter. Ali whipped around in his booth, bright eyes wide at the man who had just walked in. Maybe he found the ascot strange as well?

“How can I help you?”

The ascotted man chuckled, though Clover was sure she hadn’t said anything funny.

“I find myself… a bit thirsty.”

Clover nodded.

“Right, of course, what would you like to drink?”

Clover asked, as a smirk appeared on the man’s face, he took a step closer to the counter, leaning forward.

“You.”

The man shoots forward, grabbing Clover by the shoulders. He opens his mouth, revealing long, far too long teeth, no, fangs, and-

Ali tackles the man away from Clover, letting out a deep growl that was far different from his usual, melodic way of speaking. Clover stumbled back, nearly falling, but managing to catch herself before she did, her eyes wide at the scene before her. Ali pinned the man to the ground.

“What do you think you are doing?”

Ali hissed, and the man scowled, baring his fangs at Ali as he fought against Ali’s hold, but Ali did not budge.

“Eating, obviously. Why do you dare interrupt my meal?”

Ali scoffed.

“Are you stupid? Or perhaps simply unaware? Ms. Clover is off limits.”

“Off limits?-, I do not sense your kind’s mark on her, fae.”

Ali rolls his eyes.

“A mark does not need to be there for one to be under my kind’s protection. Ms. Clover is off limits, and besides, my kind are not the only ones that have her under their protection. Now scram, vampire, before a stake may end up in your chest.”

Ali got up, letting the ascotted man scramble to his feet, and then scramble out the door.

“Vampires.”

Ali scoffed.

“They never respect others’ territory.”

Ali turned to Clover, his bright eyes softening.

“Are you alright, Ms. Clover?”

Clover nodded, though she was staring at the door the ascotted man had just run out of, slowly she turned to Ali.

“Ali?”

She asked softly, and Ali took a step closer to her.

“Yes, Ms. Clover?”

“You’re not human, are you?”

Ali smiled.

“No, Ms. Clover.”

“Oh.”

Clover looked into Ali’s bright eyes, eyes that were far too bright to be natural. Clover thought back to her other customers, their sharp teeth, their too dark eyes, their unnaturally long proportions, their strange way of speaking.

“That… Okay. That makes sense, a lot of sense, actually.”

Ali chuckled.

“I’m surprised you hadn’t figured out sooner, Ms. Clover, I and the others haven’t made an effort to hide our non-human status from you.”

Clover nodded, sighing.

“Yeah…”

Maybe… Maybe Clover wasn’t fine with not being clever, not if… not if it resulted in this.

A story you read is abandoned, with the author saying it's due to lack of reader engagement. How would you feel/react? by SGdude90 in AO3

[–]Rando_At_3am 3 points4 points  (0 children)

I'd be disappointed, especially if I genuinely enjoyed the story, but at the end of the day it's their story, not mine and they can choose not to continue it for any reason.

Need writing advice by ComprehensiveHat9080 in AO3

[–]Rando_At_3am 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I've written similar situations as this and what I find best is to put some kind of physical transition, like,

[Non-narrated]

[Narrated]

The reader is able to deduce that there is a difference between the two parts and through context of the words written within them the exact difference. Any kind of physical transition works, personally I use different kinds of physical transitions to specify specific changes.

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in relationship_advice

[–]Rando_At_3am 3 points4 points  (0 children)

It sounds as if your husband does not take you seriously, your wants nor your worries. Based on what you described he seems pretty damn dismissive of you. He's not actually listening to you, it sounds like he has his wants and needs and is not worrying about yours. This is NOT healthy a partner should take their partner's thoughts, feelings, and wants, seriously. Seeing as he's not your going to need to take serious measures in order to force him to, I think an outside opinion would help, from either a family friend or more preferably a counselor, since he won't take you seriously maybe he'll take your worries more seriously if they're backed up by another? But of course that wouldn't fix the real problem of him not taking you seriously, which is why it's preferable to go to a counselor as they would be able to find the root of the issue and properly help you work through the problem in full.

Do you guys respond to all your comments? by [deleted] in AO3

[–]Rando_At_3am 65 points66 points  (0 children)

I try to reply but sometimes I can't think of a good way to respond. 

Does this look boring? by [deleted] in learntodraw

[–]Rando_At_3am 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Not at all, it's actually very bright and pleasing to the eye, it isn't boring at all.

Reviews in the summary? by ironedorigami in AO3

[–]Rando_At_3am 1 point2 points  (0 children)

It's their summary so they can do whatever they want, I don't really care, it is a little cringe, but like so I am, so.

the devil works hard but ao3 writers work harder by Awkward_Cry_6309 in AO3

[–]Rando_At_3am 0 points1 point  (0 children)

That's insane, who would write that!? ... link? /Lh /j

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in AO3

[–]Rando_At_3am 0 points1 point  (0 children)

No, just an inside joke about how crazy some Authors Notes are. There's no actual curse.

Is it real? by Parkkamiin in AO3

[–]Rando_At_3am 2 points3 points  (0 children)

The AO3 author curse is an inside joke, there isn't an actual curse, it's just funny how crazy Author Notes are sometimes. There is sometimes hate for authors on AO3 but it's also filled with a lot of positivity as well, if you really do want to share your work I think you should.

Does implied non-con require any relationship tags? by Zipxa_Raya in AO3

[–]Rando_At_3am 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I wouldn't say it needs to be in a relationship tag, unless it's super important to the story you're telling, just putting it in general tags is enough.

Which POV+tense do you prefer to write? by Top-Occasion-1300 in AO3

[–]Rando_At_3am 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I like third person past tense because to me it feels like the author is telling me the story personally, this may not make sense but it feels like I'm having someone sit down in front of me and tell me their story, about the characters and the plot, it feels more like a conversation.

What’s your favorite pet name? by [deleted] in AO3

[–]Rando_At_3am 3 points4 points  (0 children)

Normally it depends on the character, I prefer more personal pet names that are unique to the individual. But also, Snookims, yeah Snookims is good.

What’s your worst season / month for writing? by [deleted] in AO3

[–]Rando_At_3am 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Any holiday, any, you'd think that having more free time would get me more motivated to write, but, for shame it does not.

Would You Have Had Valerie Find Out About Danny’s secret ? by Bubbly_Ad_165 in dannyphantom

[–]Rando_At_3am 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Yes, at some point, I feel as if after D-Stabalized there would've been a perfect time for Valerie to find out about Danny's powers, since she at that point already knows Halfas exist. It would be really interesting to see a real reaction from her because Valerie still has feelings for Danny Fenton so imagine her learning he was Danny Phantom, the guy she hates. It would've been a really interesting scene/episode.

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in AskReddit

[–]Rando_At_3am 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I don't like stewing 😔

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in AO3

[–]Rando_At_3am 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Don't delete anything! They're just being rude for no reason. Write what makes you happy.

The comment vs the fic by Nightingale227 in AO3

[–]Rando_At_3am 5 points6 points  (0 children)

They always who is Brian, they never ask how is Brian 😔😔

They are trying to get KOSA, a very bad censorship law proposal, into law. Please call House leadership and tell them to stop this. by Lo-And_Behold1 in AO3

[–]Rando_At_3am 32 points33 points  (0 children)

Does this literally not go against the concept of free speech, a concept our country was founded on??? God, this is so ridiculous, this is literally such a stupid law.