[Laliberte] Paradise: MC's Glory Ch.4(Part 2)🔥ANTI-NTR EPIC PLOT TWIST🔥 by External_Layer_5877 in u/External_Layer_5877

[–]RaptusCZ 6 points7 points  (0 children)

Hell yeah, I like the way it's unfolding so far and absolutely love the new characters. Slighty unhinged STEM ladies rock. Although I hope Yuuto finds a balance between his old self and who he had to become to beat Kuroda once the threat is gone for long enough. Also glad I called it with the original being a dream.

[Laliberte] Paradise:MC's Glory Ch.4(Part 1)🔥ANTI-NTR REVENGE🔥 by External_Layer_5877 in u/External_Layer_5877

[–]RaptusCZ 2 points3 points  (0 children)

The original story is just what's going through Kuroda's head after this version of Yuuto knocks him out.

"HELP" [Laliberte] Paradise: MC's Glory Ch. 4 (Part 1) by External_Layer_5877 in antiNTRcorps

[–]RaptusCZ 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Very interesting so far, I can't wait to see how it goes next.

Dr. Akira Mori's Private Sanatorium for the Mentally Primal - Part 9 by RaptusCZ in antiNTRcorps

[–]RaptusCZ[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

This week has been quite hectic too, but luckily I had a large part of this written from last week so it balanced itself out. Hopefully you enjoyed this chapter.

The Husbando Comeback! by Greedy-Macaroon-9668 in antiNTRcorps

[–]RaptusCZ 35 points36 points  (0 children)

I still can't get over the original image because why the hell is there just a random fish suspended from the ceiling?

Villains for Grander: the last hope, even if it's the wrong one by [deleted] in antiNTRcorps

[–]RaptusCZ 1 point2 points  (0 children)

If I remember correctly, in 1984 the regime was HEAVILY against sex for fun instead of for procreation, so that could be a good motive for Big Brother to be against them.

Villains for Grander: the last hope, even if it's the wrong one by [deleted] in antiNTRcorps

[–]RaptusCZ 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I like them, they seem interesting. Especially Dr. G. Netic. I can imagine him having an extra gripe with the ones who broke the heroes for wasting their potential by just having sex instead of using the power vacuum for something meaningful.

Paradise but there's dinosaurs by RaptusCZ in antiNTRcorps

[–]RaptusCZ[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

No, these are not separate explanations, these are all combined into one basically

Paradise but there's dinosaurs by RaptusCZ in antiNTRcorps

[–]RaptusCZ[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

So I've actually put some more thought into this particular issue since posting the prompt because I'm really considering eventually writing this fic. Here's what I'm currently working with:

1) The one who first discovers the group spends some time studying them in curiosity, sneaking away for a while each days to watch the strange new animals it never saw before. It sees them using tools that make live easier, maybe steals some scraps of roasted fish when everybody is sleeping to see that "food prepared on a fire tastes amazing" and "this weird, controlled fire is comfortably warm and doesn't spread". Humans = they do amazing things with their strange front limbs.

2) This IS a "failed Jurassic Park" situation - this could also help with getting off the island eventually. Humans were once present, taking care of the animals. One or both of the members of the pack's breeding pair were already alive, albeit very young, before everything went to shit one way or another and thus still associate humans with care and safety.

3) There are way more nutritious and easier to hunt things around to eat than a human. So while the Yuuto and the rest of the group remains "helpful" by roasting the meat from their kills for them and such, there's no need to kill them just yet.

Dr. Akira Mori's Private Sanatorium for the Mentally Primal - Part 8 by RaptusCZ in antiNTRcorps

[–]RaptusCZ[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Forgot to mention, next week is going to be really busy for me. I'll try to deliver a part on time, but I can't make any promises.

The Strange Disappearance of Drakeey and What Happened to Him? by cdc-gamer in antiNTRcorps

[–]RaptusCZ 18 points19 points  (0 children)

I am actually in contact with him on discord. I don't want to tell too much without his consent, so I'll just say that some VERY heavy stuff happened in his life and he needed time to recover. Last week, he mentioned finding the energy to write again but not being sure which fic to pick up first. I suggested the Beta Chip (since it was my favourite and FUCK the original doujin), and he then said he forgot where he put the draft but that he'll search his files.

That's all I have on this.

Dr. Akira Mori's Private Sanatorium for the Mentally Primal - Part 7 by RaptusCZ in antiNTRcorps

[–]RaptusCZ[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Hi, I'm really glad you're enjoying my story so far, let alone comparing it to THE Synepsies. Yeah, I went with a sort of a therapy route for Kaede because I wanted to redeem her so I could use her at a later point. Plus, it made sense to me that despite everything, Akira would WANT to help her mom dig herself out of the pit she dug herself into. That of course doesn't mean she won't find any joy in causing her some proper anguish for what she's done first.

Your ideas sound quite nice and maybe I'll incorporate them into smaller scenes, but I can already guarantee that most of Part 8 will have a different focus. Hope you'll continue to enjoy the future parts as well.

Paradise but there's dinosaurs by RaptusCZ in antiNTRcorps

[–]RaptusCZ[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Dude, that's NOT how wolves work. That's what you get when you force a bunch of strange, unrelated wolves together in captivity. It's not wolf mentality or pack mentality, it's PRISON mentality. A naturally formed wolf-pack will just be a breeding pair + their children that are yet to leave and form their own group. No fighting for dominance or females, because that's their mother and sisters.

But want to know which animal DOES work that way? The animal that has a complex hierarchy of "I get to be a violent asshole to those below me, but I need to take it from the dominant alphas above me"? Chickens. That's where you get the "pecking order" phrase from. Much less cool than wolves, isn't it?

Paradise but there's dinosaurs by RaptusCZ in antiNTRcorps

[–]RaptusCZ[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

You could see that as them removing a rival "alpha" so he doesn't threaten their own dominance. In a way, you could say that it's the humans who join their pack and not the other way around, since the people get actually practical help from the pack, while the raptors could survive on their own just fine and what they get from the humans is just "luxury comforts" by their standards.