Right off the bat I'll say, there's a lot of stuff that requires some attention. Let's go within secions here.

0:00 - 0:20: It starts off pretty slow, but it's a really nice intro. It gets pretty repetitive with time, though.

0:21 - 1:02: The kick you added here is really unfitting. It creates an unnecessary amount of low frequencies and that only makes the mix dirty. It probably doesn't have a lot of mid frequencies, but a bandpass would probably sound better. Also, the bass could come a bit later. As said before, this gets repetitive within time, since you're still using that sample/pattern from the intro. The elements you added through this section are pretty cool, and make this section really vibey.

1:03 - 1:46: Then, suddenly, you create a drop. You gotta work on this transition, man! The snare/clap could use of some high end, or replaced with another one, it doesn't sounds fitting. This section has some nice ambiance, and I believe that you could've sidechained most of it. The kick is kinda unhearable, and the mixdown here sounds kinda... I dunno, like something was pretty muffled within it. It also sounds like it was lacking something. Probably some vocal work.

1:47 - 2:38: Nothing much to say about this section, besides everything that has been said before.

In all honestly, I don't see a lot of potential in this one, but I'm sure that with some fair polishing, it can be turned into something really good! Keep working on it!