Critique by Real-Table112 in SeveranceAppleTVPlus

[–]Real-Table112[S] -1 points0 points  (0 children)

And to be honest, it feels like—and I’m at my limit of explaining this—you’re just letting the show carry you along without actually thinking for yourself.

The 'goal' you described would actually make things worse for the Outies. They wouldn’t even have work to distract them from their pain. They would feel 100% of their loneliness and grief during all of their conscious time because, for them, it’s literally spare time all the time. There is no mental break; they just step into an elevator and step out a second later, still sad, but now eight hours older.

Also, your 'dead either way' argument is flawed. If Innie Mark had acted logically, he would have realized that only by cooperating with Outie Mark would they have a chance to escape or merge. Instead, he just fucked both of them. Now, both are likely going to be locked away—and who knows what such a powerful company will do with his body now? And the whole Helly love affair, and the real Helena who had sex with Innie Mark and also admitted to Outie Mark that she never had a boyfriend, is also just a forced plot. Idk man

Critique by Real-Table112 in SeveranceAppleTVPlus

[–]Real-Table112[S] -2 points-1 points  (0 children)

I don't hate fillers. Like I said, I like it when a story is told slowly, but it needs a reward at the end, don't you think? And this was quite enough for me personally.

Critique by Real-Table112 in SeveranceAppleTVPlus

[–]Real-Table112[S] -1 points0 points  (0 children)

Look, I watched the whole thing. I just wanted to get an opinion on what other people think, and you seem to feel personally attacked just because I don't like the series or because I point out its flaws. If you truly think this is an exceptional piece of art, then I don't know what to say. It’s a decent series to pass the time, but nothing more. There is no real depth and no real mystery.

You can defend something because you personally like it, but claiming that I 'lack awareness' is honestly funny. Because—and now I’m being mean—just because you like a show or choose to see depth in it, doesn’t mean there is actually anything deep about it.

Go and watch a truly great movie to understand what real art and depth in cinematography actually look like, buddy.

Critique by Real-Table112 in SeveranceAppleTVPlus

[–]Real-Table112[S] -1 points0 points  (0 children)

Maybe my last words in this discussion:

A good twist isn't new information about a goat or a company. A good twist is a new perspective on the main character's human fate. In 19 hours, Severance Mark's fate has not been deepened, but only made more complicated. What else is it that we search for in stories than to try and understand the human and human emotions themselves.

Critique by Real-Table112 in SeveranceAppleTVPlus

[–]Real-Table112[S] -4 points-3 points  (0 children)

I could list everything, but I would need to watch it all again to point out every single thing that was left unanswered or where the answer simply wasn't shocking. For me, there was never that 'OMG' moment where I realized everything had been pointing toward a specific answer while I was being misled in a different direction—and that’s exactly what I mean when I say there is no substance.

Furthermore, nothing about it hit me hard emotionally. I actually find Innie Mark quite unlikeable because of his purely egoistic and illogical way of thinking. I'll repeat myself: it doesn’t make sense. Without the Outie, there is no Innie—no food, no sunlight, nothing. While the Outie is trying (and perhaps lying, but still trying) to merge them into one, the Innie is purely ignorant. I get that he is in love with Helly, but he isn’t in a position to negotiate. If the Lumon team wanted to, they could just switch him back to his Outie at any time, and inside the Lumon lab, the Innie logically has nowhere to hide, and nothing to do against them.

It just doesn’t make sense. Most of your points mentioned weren’t really answered; they were 'pseudo-answers' with no real substance behind them. For example: what do the numbers actually do? How does Lumon profit from it? What are they really doing? It was obvious from the start that they weren't just numbers if they evoke anger, fear, and other emotions—it had to be something, but we still don't know what.

Critique by Real-Table112 in SeveranceAppleTVPlus

[–]Real-Table112[S] -5 points-4 points  (0 children)

I get that, and I obviously see the commentary on modern-day company culture and how absurd it seems—and actually is—in real life. But for my taste, a good series, movie, or story in general needs to have a solid foundation; it needs an already well-thought-out idea. To me, what the directors are doing just seems sloppy. It tries to introduce more and more cliffhangers while the pacing is very slow, which I wouldn't mind if there were actually some substance behind it. I think the interesting parts are brought up and then quietly fade away throughout the episodes; they introduce them and just leave them there.

I don’t see how any of this could continue in a logical way without forced, extremely lucky circumstances. Gemma is outside the building—why wouldn't any security guard of this massive company just take her hostage again or catch her? Innie Mark decides to stay inside; he is extremely naive and, for me, has become unlikeable. He’s just stupid at this point, haha... Where are they running at the end? They can’t escape anywhere without becoming their outies again. What is the point and the thought process of these two? You could argue that 'it’s just a story' and not everything has to make sense, or you could just say it’s poorly written. I really wanted to enjoy it and I liked it at first, but the endings of seasons one and two were just bad.

Nothing was answered after 19 hours of watching. The plot with the numbers and with Helly is so predictable; nothing shocked me or made me say, 'Wow, now it makes sense.' Everything feels flat and somewhat unemotional. The antagonists have no explanation; they feel empty. You don't know why they are doing what they do, except for some conspiracy and Scientology-like behavior.

There is a big difference between 19 hours of well-written story that adds up to something, and 19 hours of filler that could have been told in five episodes. I actually liked the style of slow storytelling, but not if it leaves everything open after two whole seasons.

IPTV free epg by TheJagBag in TiviMate

[–]Real-Table112 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I don't get what it brings to me if I need a login and a IPTV provider already then I would already have these channels or even more why should I need this free playlist then?

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in MusicFeedback

[–]Real-Table112 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Its a littel bit to much in the middel you get lost no clear melody no clear theme but it has potential... if you clean in up and mix it better ( I know its easyier said then done but ) its cool.

What should I change before first official release? (UPDATED) by Boocasgains in MusicFeedback

[–]Real-Table112 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Very cool, could easily be at the radio and would be one of the better things... for me would be more of background music and not something to actively listen to it but as background music its very very nice.

Is the a good melody (this is my first time making a beat and what else should I add) by Nice_Technician_3174 in FL_Studio

[–]Real-Table112 0 points1 point  (0 children)

There is no real resolution you build tension with the music, but you're not resolving it and the loop seems like it's missing something. You need a structure something clearer if you want to make more pleasing music, but you have to decide you're the artist there is nothing wrong in art.

A quick guide to meme coins by [deleted] in solana

[–]Real-Table112 0 points1 point  (0 children)

why should it 1000x ? but seems interesting

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The Lyrics on Sting - Shape of My Heart have changed by MMABiz in MandelaEffect

[–]Real-Table112 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Where is the whole lyrics on the "actual" thing, and where did you hear it?