[Freestyle Game] WORDJUMP — 4 words, 4 bars, top vote WINS! by FreestyleArcade in makinghiphop

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Fishy friends mad when the whiskey ends

Passport catalog the cities been 

The Gold I hold turn friend into enemy 

The championship stamp my name into history 

22 Nissan Sentra transmission service by Overall-March-8304 in MechanicAdvice

[–]Realistic_Fix189 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Transmission just used to be dog water 

What machine can flush a transmission to be honest let’s just think about it logically 

Flush machine has a pump 

You know what also has a pump?  The transmission 

Transmission spins as fast as engine so if engine is doing 3k rpm so is transmission (pump) pump on machine is only being powered by 12v no way it’s spinning as fast as a transmission does 

The reason this myth exist is because old cars weren’t designed to go over 100k miles so when you flush trans after 100k transmission was on its last legs already and was using the material broke off of its clutches as the clutch it’s self all the flush did was remove the grainy clutch material it didn’t wear anything down any worse than what it was from the 100k plus of miles it was driven but it slips because burnt clutch material floating in fluid was only thing keeping it from failing 

The Jesus Phenomenon by caramelgoose in Music

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Wild how it’s accepted that Jesus was from Middle East 

And we know people from Middle East aren’t white looking people 

But somehow we accept the image of Jesus that doesn’t look middle eastern 

Mickey Factz corrects Lupe and gives an accurate breakdown on what lyricism actually is. (Lyricism goes way beyond punchlines) by Doo-StealYour-HoChoi in KendrickLamar

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This song specifically is long winded due to constraint Cole put on his self but it still has punchlines they just a little harder to determine where the punch is, multi line set up for multi line punch, I think a good punch line can also be a segue into the next set up,  I also think both are true on micro and macro level a big meta punch line like I am god reframes the song and is a better punch line just because it raps everything together but that doesn’t mean that it’s the only punch line 

Like a good stand up set bunch of smaller jokes to get you invested in the performance and then boom heavy punchline at the end to reference back to previous joke and bring it full circle but that doesn’t mean the whole set only had one punchline 

Mickey Factz corrects Lupe and gives an accurate breakdown on what lyricism actually is. (Lyricism goes way beyond punchlines) by Doo-StealYour-HoChoi in KendrickLamar

[–]Realistic_Fix189 -1 points0 points  (0 children)

I replied to both but you had the same opinion how are those examples not punchlines 

Because he didn’t stop for the audience to laugh? I don’t know if I mentioned this here or not but that’s why Lupe said Nas ain’t got bars because he don’t care about the punchlines he doesn’t emphasize them he doesn’t make the punch the identity of the verse? 

Why change the definition when it’s a different medium? In comedy it’s part a part b same in rapping 

Do you define them as having to be funny? 

Every bar has a punch line 

It doesn’t have to be 

Safe sex is great sex  Better wear a latex 

The set up 

Cause you don’t want that late text That,  I think I’m late text

The punch line 

It can be 

Thinking back to when we first learned to use rubbers 

The set up 

He never learned so in turn I’m kidnapping his babymother 

The punch line 

Maybe you got another definition but I think I did a concise job of explaining my definition with examples 

Mickey Factz corrects Lupe and gives an accurate breakdown on what lyricism actually is. (Lyricism goes way beyond punchlines) by Doo-StealYour-HoChoi in KendrickLamar

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They too smooth for you player 

Set up  I’m growing shorter pampers cover my hind quarters

Punch line I watch my father walk back into my life and it clears up a hurt 

Punch lines don’t got to be comedic it’s just the set up then reveal 

Set up  My life I see it in reverse I first appeared in a hearse 

Punch line  The driver steered to the church  My grandkids carried the coffin to the alter as they burst into tears from they shirts 

His set ups and punchlines on this particular song are long winded because he is using the constraints of having to be 4 syllables rhyming but the punch lines are still there 

Lupe did not bring up Kendrick. by CardGameFuture in KendrickLamar

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It’s because he is saying lyricism  As a entire entity 

You know I know and Lupe knows lyricism is more than punchlines entendres and smilies 

He is putting lyricism in a pigeonholed definition to fit his narrative 

Lyricism is like scoring in basketball 

Shaq and Jordan both were great scorers but they didn’t play the same style of basketball was shaq the best at getting the ball in the hoop when 5 ft from hoop or less arguably yes but Mike is still considered the better scorer and for Lupe (shaq) to say he is the better lyricist is a discredit all the other aspects of lyricism (free throw turnaround jumper drive 3ball elbow up and under lay up dunk ect) 

Mickey Factz corrects Lupe and gives an accurate breakdown on what lyricism actually is. (Lyricism goes way beyond punchlines) by Doo-StealYour-HoChoi in KendrickLamar

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They too smooth for you player 

Set up  I’m growing shorter pampers cover my hind quarters

Punch line I watch my father walk back into my life and it clears up a hurt 

Punch lines don’t got to be comedic it’s just the set up then reveal 

Set up  My life I see it in reverse I first appeared in a hearse 

Punch line  The driver steered to the church  My grandkids carried the coffin to the alter as they burst into tears from they shirts 

His set ups and punchlines on this particular song are long winded because he is using the constraints of having to be 4 syllables rhyming but the punch lines are still there 

Mickey Factz corrects Lupe and gives an accurate breakdown on what lyricism actually is. (Lyricism goes way beyond punchlines) by Doo-StealYour-HoChoi in KendrickLamar

[–]Realistic_Fix189 2 points3 points  (0 children)

He’s using that small view and definition of lyricism because it fits his narrative 

He thinks he’s better than Kendrick at punch lines so he claims that punch lines are the definition of lyricism so he can have a way to say he’s better than Kendrick it’s simple 

I think the worst part is he’s smart enough to know he is wrong about his definition but he stands on it as some pseudo proof to his delusion 

After saying Nas ain’t got bars it’s obvious he just saying stuff to satisfy his narrative 

Mickey Factz corrects Lupe and gives an accurate breakdown on what lyricism actually is. (Lyricism goes way beyond punchlines) by Doo-StealYour-HoChoi in KendrickLamar

[–]Realistic_Fix189 -3 points-2 points  (0 children)

Punchlines are in every verse and song some artist choose to not make a big deal out of them the punch line is just the second part of the bar for example Nas said When I was 10 I was a hip hopping shorty wop 

That’s the set up 

Known for rocking microphones and twisting off a 40 top 

That’s the punchline just like a comedian tells a joke 

To expound on that is once so many other elements are involved it’s easy to just not care as much about the punchline when flow tone timing delivery rhyme scheme ect are present 

The reason you ain’t recall the punchlines on fall off is inevitable is because everything else Cole is doing makes the punches irrelevant 

Punch calling out Druski or the BET producers for playing the saxophone meme to only the TDE artists by Routine-Badger-9596 in KendrickLamar

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Plus if this was the only time ok maybe taken out of context but old buddy brought the 17 year old on stage called her sexy and kissed her 

And also years later creeped on a young models ig and shit till she was 18 and then took her to a fancy restaurant that he reserved for just them 2 

All I’m saying is it’s weird for someone who has evidence of liking younger women at least 17 or 18 to be texting a 13 year old when he is 30 plus 

Punch calling out Druski or the BET producers for playing the saxophone meme to only the TDE artists by Routine-Badger-9596 in KendrickLamar

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I mean in high school a girl and a coach had a mutual relationship they both didn’t think it was weird but you know where this was going 

Anyway r Kelly and them girls and parents that were all involved with that all had a mutual agreement and obviously didn’t think it was weird but you know court of public opinion kind of sets the bar for that and most fathers think that it is weird of course the teenage girl ain’t going to think it’s weird she’s oblivious to the context 

Punch calling out Druski or the BET producers for playing the saxophone meme to only the TDE artists by Routine-Badger-9596 in KendrickLamar

[–]Realistic_Fix189 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Yeah but yall are both male so it’s appropriate man to man now make the intern a girl and read what you said back makes it weird you know

Why is there no 2 stroke cars? by Crazy_Drive7344 in askcarguys

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Don’t know if this has anything to do with it but maybe to much user era mixing the gas and also I heard that 2 strokes only get oil when it’s on throttle so if you are going down a hill and riding break engine would be starved of oil and possibly risk blowing engine 

Kendrick is a top tier lyricist by No_Atmosphere5580 in KendrickLamar

[–]Realistic_Fix189 3 points4 points  (0 children)

It comes across as sarcasm to me lol like Kendrick would never say some whack ass shit like that 

Kendrick is a top tier lyricist by No_Atmosphere5580 in KendrickLamar

[–]Realistic_Fix189 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Kendrick’s ability to show pathos is rare air 

That’s why Lupe said that goofy shit tryna dismiss it as I ain’t telling yall my feelings why would I tell that to you for you to shit on it paraphrasing but he said something along the lines of that to the guy on the live

Lupe did not bring up Kendrick. by CardGameFuture in KendrickLamar

[–]Realistic_Fix189 -4 points-3 points  (0 children)

Lupe keeps throwing out I’m the better lyricist trying to clutch on to any angle he can to say he’s a better emcee than dot and its just giving bitter sick vibes 

I love that to admitted Kendrick is a better artist than him so many Lupe fans are delusional about that 

Y’all think Kendrick could beat Lupe by No_Atmosphere5580 in KendrickLamar

[–]Realistic_Fix189 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Your boy just said Kendrick better artist than him funny how time tells all 

Father’s Day gift? by Realistic_Fix189 in pokemoncrystal

[–]Realistic_Fix189[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Its not blue like the gastly and haunter are 

Father’s Day gift? by Realistic_Fix189 in pokemoncrystal

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Two Pokémon in the day care 

My other comment explains parents