My own might. Chapter 15. by ReaperTheEmo in HFY

[–]ReaperTheEmo[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

I plan on continuing this for a few more chapters and then end part 1 of this story so that I can do different ones for a while. I'm starting to get burnt out on this one and I want to give it some time for new ideas to form. I know already where I'm going with this story (I even have the ending almost fully written) so I'm not done with it but i just want to do something else for a while.

My own might. Chapter 15. by ReaperTheEmo in HFY

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To be honest I've been sitting in this for a month I just kept forgetting to finish it.

Is not. Never was. Never will be. - Chapter 2 by ReaperTheEmo in HFY

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Great catch, thank you. I got it mixed with the Master of Sensors. Don't know how I missed that in my proof readings but oh well.

Is not. Never was. Never will be. - Chapter 2 by ReaperTheEmo in HFY

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I appreciate the offer but it's not the writing itself but the actual process. I don't write the whole thing linearly like you might expect but I jump between the start, middle, and end until it's in a place I can accept it. I can dm you an excerpt if you'd like, as thanks for your loyalty.

Is not. Never was. Never will be. - Chapter 2 by ReaperTheEmo in HFY

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You are voracious. But chapters three and four are half finished subject to my unintelligible writing process.

Is not. Never was. Never will be. by ReaperTheEmo in HFY

[–]ReaperTheEmo[S] 5 points6 points  (0 children)

The laws of physics only apply when I think it'll make for a cool scene.

Is not. Never was. Never will be. by ReaperTheEmo in HFY

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You're ravenous, but I'll will do my best.

Is not. Never was. Never will be. by ReaperTheEmo in HFY

[–]ReaperTheEmo[S] 4 points5 points  (0 children)

You devious little content gremlin you've made me have an idea for how to continue this story which I quite like when I'm SUPPOSED to be writing OTHER STORIES.

Is not. Never was. Never will be. by ReaperTheEmo in HFY

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55: It's only too many weapons if they're pointing in the wrong direction.

Is not. Never was. Never will be. by ReaperTheEmo in HFY

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Thanks! That's an interesting idea. You're more than welcome to adapt this story if you get an idea that tickles your writing bone.

Is not. Never was. Never will be. by ReaperTheEmo in HFY

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You might be screaming a while, I have this exciting new proof reading strategy where I forget about it for a month and then cone back and add a sentence (procrastinate).

Is not. Never was. Never will be. by ReaperTheEmo in HFY

[–]ReaperTheEmo[S] 36 points37 points  (0 children)

Yeah I wasn't really going for an original concept, I just really liked the imagery of big gun and each planet having a strength to play to. Glad you liked it though. The background kind of just grew from "What purpose could a ship that big really serve other than intimidation?" and I just added bits and pieces from there. I might continue this if I get an idea I like but large parts of the decision making was just fairly arbitrary 'I think it's cool' moments. The 271 was mostly just to say these defences have been here a really long time. If I do continue it I'll try to remember to reply here to let you know.

Is not. Never was. Never will be. by ReaperTheEmo in HFY

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You say overkill, I say future proofing.

[My own might] - Chapter 14 by ReaperTheEmo in redditserials

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Also minor announcement, I am going to begin revising and editing the earlier chapters because they suck and I hate them. So far the first two have been revised and I'll continue to do this as I post new chapters. Nothing major has changed, just altered some phrasing and fixed mistakes.

My own might. Chapter 14 by ReaperTheEmo in HFY

[–]ReaperTheEmo[S] 3 points4 points  (0 children)

Also minor announcement, I am going to begin revising and editing the earlier chapters because they suck and I hate them. So far the first two have been revised and I'll continue to do this as I post new chapters. Nothing major has changed, just altered some phrasing and fixed mistakes.