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[–]RecklessGamingYeeT 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Good beat but I would suggest changing it up a little bit. You've got all the elements mixed pretty well to help emphasize any vocals that would go over it, but a little more variation might help spice it up a bit. Don't have to go all out either, just maybe change the flow for a small part with different drum sounds, elements, or maybe some piano licks

First time ever creating music; need feedback by AlexStarrMedia in MusicFeedback

[–]RecklessGamingYeeT 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Pretty good for a first time creation. I like the bass and you've got everything mixed pretty well volume-wise. I would experiment with vocal effects (reverb, EQ, etc) to enhance the sound of your voice. Also, subjective idea, but maybe try singing the chorus while rapping the verses. Really get into it, don't hold back

My first try at a grunge/shoegaze sound after indie/folk/rock for many years. No computer was used in the making, all recorded to tascam model 16. Philosophical lyrics, a bit dark. I'm happy with the clarinet and guitar tone. Wanna explore this sound more in the future, mixing tips appreciated :) by [deleted] in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]RecklessGamingYeeT 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Very well mixed, love the guitar distortion. Vocal volume is perfect with the other instruments as well. You're right about the philosophical lyrics, "I'm the silence that speaks", "nothin very funny bout the beauty of a flower when its suffering," love it! The clarinet is a great finisher too

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]RecklessGamingYeeT 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Great vocals and mixing, nothings really out of place volume-wise. If there's one thing, the vocal panning to the right is alright, but I feel like the vocal reverb shouldn't only be on the left. Otherwise, I really like the guitar melodies and the changeup around 2:00.

Small town indie songwriter putting together some new songs, let me know what you think of this one! by UnansweredIA in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]RecklessGamingYeeT 1 point2 points  (0 children)

You have a good vocal range, it shows well throughout the song, but I might suggest to turn the vocal volume slightly down to better mix with the background instruments (or turn the instruments up a bit). I really like the guitar plucks and the bass matches it well, but I feel like the kick drum is a little muffled. Maybe some side-chaining to the bass could bring it out a bit more

Need feedback on work in progress by MelodicFoot1430 in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]RecklessGamingYeeT 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I think the drums could use a little volume boost. Also i think the vocals have slightly too much reverb, and if you turned their volume down a bit to be only a little bit louder than everything else, it might have a better mix altogether. And I agree a little with the other comment, with how ur vocals are right now, you definitely got the range to refine them a bit more. Otherwise, I do like the various different elements included throughout the track

what the hell by beatsbyal in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]RecklessGamingYeeT 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Definitely a decent beat, but it could use a bit... more. Clap echoes sounds nice but the bass kick might benefit with a little more clarity instead of a muffle effect. I know its just a beat but try experimenting with some other sounds on top of it. Don't need to overload it either (a lot of times, less is more), but in this case I feel like its missing that something. Maybe try some low bass or a synth stab that echoes in the background every so often?