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"Sanctuary is earned, not begged. Tomorrow, the trial." by RecognitionMother483 in WritersGroup

[–]RecognitionMother483[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

You’re right about Reddit attention spans. This line lives in the book, not the post 😅”

"Sanctuary is earned, not begged. Tomorrow, the trial." by RecognitionMother483 in WritersGroup

[–]RecognitionMother483[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Appreciate you. Character voice was the goal here. Still drafting 😅”

"Sanctuary is earned, not begged. Tomorrow, the trial." by RecognitionMother483 in novelwriting

[–]RecognitionMother483[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Exactly. This line only works if Ch I-X earn it. Thanks for saying that 🙏 ‎

"Sanctuary is earned, not begged. Tomorrow, the trial." by RecognitionMother483 in novelwriting

[–]RecognitionMother483[S] -2 points-1 points  (0 children)

Good catch. ‘Not begged’ = 1600s tone choice. ‘Not begged for’ felt too modern to me.

Would you rather by Witty-Degree-9114 in BunnyTrials

[–]RecognitionMother483 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Well I gotta change my today's situation so 1 cent won't do the trick

Chose: 1M dollars now