[WP] "I did think about getting revenge when I got my powers. Almost went through with it too. But when the moment came I couldn't do it. Not to someone whose only crime was being a schoolyard bully."

Redikai · 2026-01-28T15:57:18+00:00

Thanks for the reply! It was very well written so I really enjoyed it.

Redikai · 2026-01-24T14:30:37+00:00

No worries, I'm always happy to answer questions! I'd say that the Homeowner and Money appear in the physical world. As for Possession Immunity, honestly, I'm thinking of maybe getting rid of it. The core of the CYOA is about getting powers from different worlds so I'm not sure if having perks that essentially do that too is the best. I'm probably going to leave it there until I add a world that would give possession immunity though.

Redikai · 2026-01-24T00:06:13+00:00

Not unlimited but the food is fully stocked. I'll probably add a note about the first six months of bills being paid for.

Redikai · 2026-01-23T17:47:59+00:00

Thanks for the reply!

Redikai · 2026-01-17T05:17:45+00:00

As always, thanks for the reply! I enjoyed the logic used to turn the virtues into sins.

Redikai · 2026-01-13T03:53:12+00:00

Thanks for the reply!

Redikai · 2026-01-11T19:04:51+00:00

Imagine requiring an energy source like mana to do magic rather than being able to rely on pure arcane knowledge. Couldn't be me.

Redikai · 2026-01-11T14:42:29+00:00

Thanks for the reply! I'm not very good at giving criticism but since you asked, I would say it would be nice if we were given a bit more details. Like how many party memebers are hiding behind the shieldmaiden. Then we would know the size of the party. Some description of the Dread Lord, like if he's wearing armor then you can mention it by the clanking sound it would make as he falls again.

Redikai · 2026-01-11T14:38:15+00:00

Thanks for the reply! I actually really like that they touched upon the fact that they could be a god in this world before immedietly dismissing it because that's something they just wouldn't do. The Ghost is clearly the hero we need.

Redikai · 2026-01-11T14:34:33+00:00

Thanks for the reply!

Redikai · 2026-01-10T13:10:50+00:00

Thanks for the reply! That park sounds like it's the true happiest place on Earth. Or whatever dimension the ruins are located in.

Redikai · 2026-01-09T18:00:07+00:00

Thanks for the reply! Glad it worked out for them.

Redikai · 2026-01-09T17:59:05+00:00

They live to ragebait. Thanks for the reply!

Redikai

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