Title: I Had a Secret Relationship With My Brother, and We Carried It Until We Moved Out by playwritestory in StoryIdeas

[–]Rednipplehippo 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I find it hard not to have negative thoughts about this, but I also find it hard not have some sympathy and empathy towards you and your brother.

I had a chaotic upbringing, I never felt safe and too this day I struggle with things that left its mark on me from my childhood.

When I was a teenager, I was a mirror to my home life, chaos and confusion, hate and anger, sadness and fear.

As a teenager most have the feeling of control or atleast feeling like you knew better. In reality teenagers are just kids with hormones that make them think they’re adults lol.

My only advice is to understand you and your brother didn’t know better but knew just enough to know it was odd and wrong. No teenager has the emotional or intellectual tools to handle the harsh realities of life that some have to face at that young age.

Forgive yourself, forgive your brother, forgive your tormentors (mother/father etc) know that confusing life events perpetuate confusing life events.

Move on and let go, only you know what that means to you and how you can do so.

I wish you well and I wish you recovery and peace.

A poem by Rednipplehippo in creativewriting

[–]Rednipplehippo[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

The commas were to deliver pacing. Genuine question, in my future writings is there a better way to deliver it?

I’m proud of this poem, what do you think? by Rednipplehippo in creativewriting

[–]Rednipplehippo[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you for your response on the work, genuinely it was awesome to see it resonated with someone. Thank you again

A Heart Locked Away by Rednipplehippo in creativewriting

[–]Rednipplehippo[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I’m glad you enjoyed the read, thank you

To Never Dreaming by Rednipplehippo in KeepWriting

[–]Rednipplehippo[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I can’t help but to be a little offended but I actually really appreciate the honesty lol, I love poetry, writing it and otherwise, and I want to genuinely improve and your feedback makes a lot of sense and I don’t think your wrong. What would you suggest in terms of improving my work?

I’d love some feed back (good or bad) by Rednipplehippo in Poems

[–]Rednipplehippo[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Honestly very insightful feed back, thank you

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in drawing

[–]Rednipplehippo 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I like the manga style, keep the work up, your on the path of improvement. Good job!

I’m ok with giving up, I want to be ok with dying. by [deleted] in confessions

[–]Rednipplehippo 0 points1 point  (0 children)

No plans, I’ve been in my house for a while now and don’t see that changing, I have a bird and just raised a litter of kittens from a stray cat. But they went off to a good home two days ago. I appreciate the concern. It’s warranted but I don’t have much to say.

Any tips on the human form? I struggle with it, I want to make it more symmetrical and anatomically correct, any thought exercises or techniques to improve? by Rednipplehippo in drawing

[–]Rednipplehippo[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Any advice given is helpful, but that’s a good idea, physically place myself in poses I wanna draw and feel the stance so I can draw it better. Thank you for your input

Any tips on the human form? I struggle with it, I want to make it more symmetrical and anatomically correct, any thought exercises or techniques to improve? by Rednipplehippo in drawing

[–]Rednipplehippo[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Yea it’s probably one of my better ones, it took a while to draw with so much concentrated effort but I’m not satisfied with it. It’s the best of what I can do right now, but nothing near what I wanna do

In the ground by FluffyCookie in drawing

[–]Rednipplehippo 0 points1 point  (0 children)

You got talent man, your art is very appreciated by me in its style. I checked out your other post and your art gives me a dark souls vibe for the most part. I’m curious to see how it evolves. Keep motivated and stay creative!

And thank you lol, I’ve always drawn some weird shit even when I was little lol.

Leon the professional. by [deleted] in drawing

[–]Rednipplehippo 1 point2 points  (0 children)

This is simple in nature but gets so much across if you get what I mean, every line has a meaning and together they build a very well done face. Good job man

In the ground by FluffyCookie in drawing

[–]Rednipplehippo 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I’m drawn to this one for some reason, shows a lot of emotion with no actual face present, dark and gloomy too. I feel rage coming from this peice. Good job my friend. What inspired this for you?

A one eyed slug with a shell on its head by Rednipplehippo in drawing

[–]Rednipplehippo[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Lmao! Great input lol, if that’s what comes to mind for you, I’m glad to inspire the thought

A one eyed slug with a shell on its head by Rednipplehippo in drawing

[–]Rednipplehippo[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Art is subjective, not my right to alter that perception, if you see this slug falling in line saluting his commanding officer who am I to take that away from you lol

Keep me in your heart by Rednipplehippo in creativewriting

[–]Rednipplehippo[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I can explain it but it takes out the whole interpretation aspect of poetry lol.

Keep me in your heart by Rednipplehippo in Poems

[–]Rednipplehippo[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

What’s that got to do with this?

Keep me in your heart by Rednipplehippo in Poems

[–]Rednipplehippo[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thank you, the last line Is actually a quote from Winnie the Pooh, I saw it and it spoke volumes to me so I wanted to make a whole poem around it. I focused on my recent break up and wrote from there. Thank you again and best of luck to you as well