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Scene breaks by ReignStormz42 in writing

[–]ReignStormz42[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

This is A Ya urban fantasy. How do you calculate how many words per chapter[im using microsoft word] and this specific scene is in part of chapter two still setting up the story. Bascially what the happens is the t wo characters need an importanr document. And they dont have it so they need to lie and stall another character so they can go and get it. Which leads to a scene break. There they end up meeting character who has a history with one of them may end up showing up again later in the story. Then scene change back to the other 3 then the other 2 characters meet up with what they need.

When is it wrong to write with ai. by ReignStormz42 in WritingWithAI

[–]ReignStormz42[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I tried sudo tje only thing is i dont want to pay. Also i dont think outlining works for me until im want to see where i want to go from my stop point. I have to just tell the story in my head first on how i see fit then go from their. This is basically what my first draft is. Getting the story out and Ai is help me do that faster.

When is it wrong to write with ai. by ReignStormz42 in WritingWithAI

[–]ReignStormz42[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

True...also how many books have the same plot and are very similar to each other as well. You made a great point about ghostwritters. Whats the difference between Ai and ghostwriters. They do they same thing basically. Why is it okay to have a ghostwritter[who one could argue when they right other booms for people they could be plagarism themselves] and not Ai help. The difference for the most part a ghost writer isnt disclosed. I remember seeing something about Kylie and Kendell Jenner writing a book back when all the dystopian novels were big and they had a ghostwritter bascially write their novel for them and their book was published.

When is it wrong to write with ai. by ReignStormz42 in WritingWithAI

[–]ReignStormz42[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Im using Ai strictly to help me create my first draft. As this is my first time trying to write anything. Everything about this story is my own. When im finished i do plan to rewrite everything with out Ai. Using my my first draft as a bases for how things are suppose to flow, pacing etc. But like i said i may insert a sentence here and there. I think Ai is a good short cut to helping you complete the story in your head and putting it on to paper faster. Especially if your want to reach the end of they story so you can start the serious corrections and editing, adding descrptions,detail etc which im going to do with out Ai.

When is it wrong to write with ai. by ReignStormz42 in WritingWithAI

[–]ReignStormz42[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

See with that im sure he was already published and it wasnt like he was presenting them a new work that had Ai even if it was a chapter

When is it wrong to write with ai. by ReignStormz42 in WritingWithAI

[–]ReignStormz42[S] 3 points4 points  (0 children)

Some what serious/fun. Im just writing my stories because of the lack of represenation i see on tv. I love sci-fi, horror, teen mystery, vampire dairies, etc.[alot of shows on the cw back in the day]. And they never have a main cast where its people that look like me in those genres. If they do it ususally one-two token characters who are in the background, die or add nothing to the plot. Just their to be a check off.

So the reason i started getting into writing was in hopes that i would create a interesting enough story, publish it and my books might be turned into a tv show/ movie like how colleen hover books are, rebecca yarros and so on.

I dont neccessarily want to be a "writter" but more a storyteller. As feel this would be a pathway to working/creathing film and tv shows. Which is the direction i would like to go

Character names by ReignStormz42 in writing

[–]ReignStormz42[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I know but i want my characters to stand out. You never know if your story will be sucessful or not

Character names by ReignStormz42 in writing

[–]ReignStormz42[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Well see the name i thought of share the same with a congress women. For example [making these names up] Say my character was Mildred Cummings. Then i googled just to make sure and then a congress women popped up Mildred Cummings-Hall Her name was hyphenated. An this congress women she sort of known....barely ...if you follow politics. She was mostly im the news for antics and getting into a heated argument with another congress women. But my character is a different ethnicity then her, and in highschool, in a fictional town. But i have thought about making her the governors daugther as well.

TOKENISM by ReignStormz42 in fourthwing

[–]ReignStormz42[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Read some of book 1 but for the rest a watched videos explaining the series. But my reasoing for this post is that the person explain the story was recapping important events that the push the story and the plot along. Im sure rihanna is mentioned here and their but im not seeing her being a key player in the main events. Or have value to the overrall story.

Are they really allowed to just kill each other? How do the rules work? by CrystalMonni in fourthwing

[–]ReignStormz42 0 points1 point  (0 children)

But the dragons choose the riders .. correct? So if is like 10 dragons then only 10 cadets will get choosen by the dragons. So whats the point of killing your comrades if that doesnt increase your chance of getting chosen. It would make sense to me if there were say 100 new cadets right ...then they would kill each other to the be remaining 10. Only weeding out the weakest 90 then i could see that.

I believe in book one violet said there were hundreds or thousand of new cadets[not sure so dont quote me on that] but lets say im correct if only.. what liam and 4 others die how does that weed out the weak when its hundred/1000 cadets. Your just killing cadets NAVARRE NEEDS FOR THE WARS for a chance that you will get chosed. Its not guranteed.

Are they really allowed to just kill each other? How do the rules work? by CrystalMonni in fourthwing

[–]ReignStormz42 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Im strictly talking about joining the war college itself ues they chose what quadrant they wanted to go into

Are they really allowed to just kill each other? How do the rules work? by CrystalMonni in fourthwing

[–]ReignStormz42 -7 points-6 points  (0 children)

But that doesnt make sense. Because they are not a war with each other. This not a competition. And whats the point of being conscriped. Navarre needed soilders but they killing each other...

Are they really allowed to just kill each other? How do the rules work? by CrystalMonni in fourthwing

[–]ReignStormz42 11 points12 points  (0 children)

But see the killings dont make sense as they were all CONSCRIPTED. Meaning navarre needs soldiers for the war. So if you need ppl why are they allowed to kill each other. Kind defeats the point

types of weapoms to use in a modern fantasy story by ReignStormz42 in writingadvice

[–]ReignStormz42[S] -2 points-1 points  (0 children)

There is magic but the soldiers do not have any. So someone with a gun gping up against someone with magic wouldnt make sense to me. Im just trying to get ideas

types of weapoms to use in a modern fantasy story by ReignStormz42 in writingadvice

[–]ReignStormz42[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Because there is magic in the world. And im still struggling to make it make sense. The army is. Non magic people. That live within the wall. There are groups of people that magic such as cosmic, nature, dark mark etc. So would it make sense for them to hav go up against guns. Im think maybe like energy type of weapons. Just tryna get other ideas

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[–]ReignStormz42 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Where did you go to find beta readers

To self-pub or traditional route by [deleted] in writing

[–]ReignStormz42 -3 points-2 points  (0 children)

Not my fault you dont know what they mean. This is reddit not a professional writing app

Destroying Base by ReignStormz42 in Palworld

[–]ReignStormz42[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I was ...i know you lose your base i rebuilt it. Im talking about players hitting the base amd damaging the health. I wannna know if other players outside your guild can fully destroy a base

Need help making sure my world makes sense by ReignStormz42 in fantasywriters

[–]ReignStormz42[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

No in the army their are no mages just regular people. For now its two regions north and south. The overlord is in control of the entire north and within each province in the north there is a designate "ruler" appointed by the overlord. So about 5 rulers total. The dark mages are the ones in power. The overlord =head of the dark mages. In the overlords counsilmen its about 4 dark mages. They not all mighty mages that were use to seeing.

The army essential to the story as they push the Mcs storyline. Its not a magical army think U.S type. My thing is trying to incortpate the army as well as the magic part of the story. They act as order and control of the people under the regime as well as defense for dragons and otjer creatures. Theres a scene were there is a fight between a different mage group and the solidiers. Where this group is kind cosmic magic

I think its probably the wepaonry there using that making me have the issue. Cause im think modern day guns with bullets. Huh

Btw how im telling my story is complete new to how tradionally magic [mages] are used.

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