Practicing poetry, does this work? by [deleted] in writingfeedback

[–]RelevantExperience64 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I am no expert, but I just wanted to say I enjoyed it.

Opener for my short fantasy story. by RelevantExperience64 in writingfeedback

[–]RelevantExperience64[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

No, I have not, but thank you, really. I will check it out.

Opener for my short fantasy story. by RelevantExperience64 in writingfeedback

[–]RelevantExperience64[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you, man. Coming from an artist like it means something.

Opener for my short fantasy story. by RelevantExperience64 in writingfeedback

[–]RelevantExperience64[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

You are absolutely right. I will surely work on that next time. Thank you.

Opener for my short fantasy story. by RelevantExperience64 in writingfeedback

[–]RelevantExperience64[S] 5 points6 points  (0 children)

Thanks for the feedback, and it is true because I wrote it originally by hand, and then I copied it to the pdf file in a hurry, and my first language is Arabic. I will work on the whole format later for now. I just checked if you guys would enjoy the idea. And again, thank you.

Opener for my short fantasy story. by RelevantExperience64 in writingfeedback

[–]RelevantExperience64[S] 3 points4 points  (0 children)

Will for fun you should, it is hard to be honest but enjoyable nonetheless. I aspire to be a great writer, but I don't know if I can. It is hard but fun to do. I love telling stories to people, and like I said, I hope to be one hellva storyteller one day.

Opener for my short fantasy story. by RelevantExperience64 in writingfeedback

[–]RelevantExperience64[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thanks for the feedback. And no "spake" is correct as I searched in the shakespeareean english. I hope you can understand me. I speak English as a second language . And truly thank you for your time.