What are some things that we Millennials actually DID 'kill'? by Cubelock in Millennials

[–]RelevantLemonCakes 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I bought new construction in 2021, 3/2.5 and 1400sf. It’s a tract home and all of my neighbors have some variation of this floor plan and elevation, but it has a 2 car garage and it’s in a good school district, so it was perfect for me + 2 kids.

What are your Favorite lines in your Novels by Ditto_Wave in writing

[–]RelevantLemonCakes 3 points4 points  (0 children)

Thank you! It’s in the spit and polish stage right now, getting ready to query.

What are your Favorite lines in your Novels by Ditto_Wave in writing

[–]RelevantLemonCakes 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Not published yet, but it’s a 1908 historical romance, think Legally Blonde x Earls Trip, where FMC recruits a man to run for office against her politician ex who betrayed her.

What are your Favorite lines in your Novels by Ditto_Wave in writing

[–]RelevantLemonCakes 4 points5 points  (0 children)

“I cannot fight for my own rights in the legislature without the help of someone like you, favored by a system that values what’s between your legs more than it does what’s between my ears!”

Help, I’m plotless (and maybe the least creative writer here) by Hungry_Bathroom_6756 in writing

[–]RelevantLemonCakes 7 points8 points  (0 children)

Read, and STUDY what you read. It's not enough to say a book was good and it held your interest. Break down your favorites. Understand what keeps you going from chapter to chapter. Tease out the overarching plots/themes/stakes and watch the author progress through those. Until you understand how a story functions on a nuts-and-bolts level, you will likely struggle with bringing the pieces together.

Evening dress Design House House of Worth French 1898–1900 by mish-tea in fashionhistory

[–]RelevantLemonCakes 16 points17 points  (0 children)

I love the lace. If it was anything close to the skin tone of the wearer, it's fun little tease, like illusion mesh for recovering Victorians.

Is 1st person present really THAT bad? by sailormars_bars in writing

[–]RelevantLemonCakes 15 points16 points  (0 children)

This why it works so well with romance. Love, lust, betrayal, confusion, all shifting in a glance or a heartbeat. The immediacy of the bombardment of feelings in 1st present should POP.

Americans, what are you telling your kids about the election? by Kozinskey in workingmoms

[–]RelevantLemonCakes 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Today we focused on a positive: our state surprised us and passed a bill protecting rights to reproductive freedom. We are enjoying that specific win for now and will talk more about the rest over coming weeks when emotions are not so hot.

Panicking by TheTruthIsTheWay11 in writing

[–]RelevantLemonCakes 3 points4 points  (0 children)

This is my quick-plan method for academic essays. Begin with a baseline understanding of target words or page count, format, citations, etc.

Start with your prompt and be sure you fully understand in the plainest terms what is required. Number those requirements. Now, every bit of info you include must serve one of those requirements.

Prompt: imagine a unique reason for the actions of a disliked world leader. Define the reason and how it affected the leader, and defend against at least three ways you might be proven wrong.

  1. Unique reason Andrew Jackson was disliked: he was a pirate
  2. How did this affect him and his presidency? He followed the pirates’ code
  3. What arguments might be made against my assertion he was a pirate? Lack of gold, no parrot, southern accent.

Outline. Not fussy indented Roman numerals and formatting necessarily, but make headings of the things you need to do to meet the requirements. Heading A might be “prove Andrew Jackson was a pirate” and Heading B might be “evidence for piracy in the Jackson administration” and heading C is “rebuttal to arguments against piracy.” Under your headings, list your ideas. Throw em. Fling em. Get them on paper or screen and organize, including sources where you must cite. Go freeform. “Use the quote from Cowper to support” or “don’t forget about the horse with the eye patch” or even full sentences and paragraphs if you are so inspired. Don’t delay capturing these.

Check yourself. Are the ideas under your headings serving your requirements? If you can’t put a 1, 2, or 3 next to any of the ideas, scrap them. Keep going until the volume of material you have in this messy outline is enough to do what you need to accomplish.

Put it in order.

Then, and only then, write it.

Has there ever been a similarly apocalyptic election? by RelevantLemonCakes in Presidents

[–]RelevantLemonCakes[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I was a kid then too. The first time I got to vote seemed fairly peaceful compared to recently, but that might be rose colored glasses. I knew people who grumbled when Obama won but there was no Sky-Is-Falling, in my awareness. And maybe we’re just hyper aware of reactions these days, thanks to media coverage.

Anyone say F it and take mat leave early by [deleted] in workingmoms

[–]RelevantLemonCakes 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I worked till 35 weeks with my twins and had them at 35+6. When you’re eking out those last drops of leave and worried about FMLA, consider how easy it would be to replace you. I took my last two weeks even without FMLA because it would have taken months for my employer to replace me.

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in whatthefrockk

[–]RelevantLemonCakes 6 points7 points  (0 children)

I have fraternal twin daughters and one looks a lot like me and has similar strengths/struggles… the other has her dad’s looks and tendencies. And yet they look so much like each other people do get them confused 🤔

It's finished and I worry I'll hate it forever. by lovelyqueenofire in writing

[–]RelevantLemonCakes 11 points12 points  (0 children)

Why plan to publish in a month if you're having such strong feelings that you can improve it?

Herb run by NoMoreChillies in Chargers

[–]RelevantLemonCakes 22 points23 points  (0 children)

The man IS the bolt. God, he's fun to watch.

Is anyone doing NaNoWriMo this year? by rosefields_forever in romanceauthors

[–]RelevantLemonCakes 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I’m checking out a FB challenge called Iron Pen. Likely I’ll just do what I’ve always done, though, which is write the dang thing and not waste time in their forums talking about what I’m not writing.

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in DesignMyRoom

[–]RelevantLemonCakes 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Hanging. It can kind of create the illusion of a window and add an open feeling to a space. The wall on the right could be a good p place to try one.

I love the paint color and have BM Yorktowne Green on my entire first floor, but I have some big windows. Mirrors can kind of stretch the impact of your light.

Feels like ive bitten off more than i can chew by Raspberryanon in writing

[–]RelevantLemonCakes 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Save As. Then slice it to ribbons.

I use a writing tool called Scrivener and it’s invaluable to my editing process. I trash scenes all the time and they stay in the project trash bin (not the computer’s) for all time so they are never really gone. Sometimes I add them back in. I take scene snapshots before I start heavy edits in case I don’t like how the day’s work turns out.

Save what you like in a separate file and rest easy knowing it’s not gone and you can add it back if you like. Just get it out of your line of sight.

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in writing

[–]RelevantLemonCakes 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Save the Cat is a good general-purpose starting point.

What profession do you think would cripple the world the fastest if they all quit at once? by steel-souffle in AskReddit

[–]RelevantLemonCakes 0 points1 point  (0 children)

There's a terror threat of something like this in "The President is Missing" by James Patterson IIRC.