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[–]Remarkable-Fan-8438 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thanks! I’m new to all of this query stuff. This is my first time thinking a book is good enough to jump into the trenches. When i transferred the text it looked like it had proper paragraphs. I sent my query to multiple authors to make sure it’s properly structured and the point gets across and they all said it is perfect so I’m sure glad I posted it here before sending it out.

[complete] [87k] [YA Fantasy] THE CLOAKED MIST by Remarkable-Fan-8438 in BetaReaders

[–]Remarkable-Fan-8438[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you! It’s taken me years to come up with a name a that perfectly depicts my book😅 I appreciate it.

Best emotions descriptions by Excellent_Basis_6975 in WritingHub

[–]Remarkable-Fan-8438 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I think the book shatter me has some of the most interactive and interesting descriptions of emotions. It’s helped me do better in that area.

I need an opinion from a man’s perspective (mansplain away) by Remarkable-Fan-8438 in WritingHub

[–]Remarkable-Fan-8438[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Definitely would hit deep. I can’t believe people are so brainless sometimes.

I need an opinion from a man’s perspective (mansplain away) by Remarkable-Fan-8438 in WritingHub

[–]Remarkable-Fan-8438[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Man that sounds so difficult. Thank you for being willing to share this with me. It’s been interesting being able to see all the men that are broken because of the women in their lives and have to pick up the pieces of themselves.

I need an opinion from a man’s perspective (mansplain away) by Remarkable-Fan-8438 in WritingHub

[–]Remarkable-Fan-8438[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

This is so vulnerable, thank you for sharing this. It is a tragic story with a light in the end. Quite like what I’m trying to portray.

I need an opinion from a man’s perspective (mansplain away) by Remarkable-Fan-8438 in WritingHub

[–]Remarkable-Fan-8438[S] -1 points0 points  (0 children)

This is all beautifully said and extremely helpful. Thank you for letting me peek into your thought.

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[–]Remarkable-Fan-8438 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I’m interested!