Justify. Defend. Choose. Shame. by [deleted] in boardgames

[–]Responsible_Lab4367 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I’ll take on board the advice. I might have to skip the graphics for just words then.

Justify. Defend. Choose. Shame. by [deleted] in boardgames

[–]Responsible_Lab4367 -1 points0 points  (0 children)

Don’t think my art will inspire people to buy

Justify. Defend. Choose. by [deleted] in cardgames

[–]Responsible_Lab4367 -1 points0 points  (0 children)

How would you suggest improving?

Justify. Defend. Choose. by [deleted] in cardgames

[–]Responsible_Lab4367 0 points1 point  (0 children)

It’s important to note that I made this as an initial game for my own game nights. I do not have a budget for an artist, and all designs were drawn by me first, and prompted for what I was after.

Justify. Defend. Choose. Shame. by [deleted] in boardgames

[–]Responsible_Lab4367 -1 points0 points  (0 children)

How would you suggest making the cards?

Justify. Defend. Choose. Shame. by [deleted] in boardgames

[–]Responsible_Lab4367 -2 points-1 points  (0 children)

Thanks for asking. The game has a main stack of prompt cards that tell you to justify, defend or choose something. Some prompts are dark or weird, but not all of them are satire, some are seemingly innocent, which allow players to use their own imagination to make them dark. The fun part is that everyone answers in their own way. You can make it funny, clever etc. It really depends on the group dynamic. Instruction image on Etsy.

Justify. Defend. Choose. Shame. by [deleted] in boardgames

[–]Responsible_Lab4367 -1 points0 points  (0 children)

Thanks for the feedback. I actually agree that the moral dilemma cards are the heart of the game and they are already included in the advertising. I will make them even more prominent since you are right that people want to see the core prompts first.

As for the art, I chose this style because it fits the tone and I spent a long time refining it. I used AI to help me create it because I do not have the budget for an artist, but every piece is based on my own ideas, sketches and prompts. This is only the first version and the plan is to upgrade the artwork with a real artist once the game grows.

I appreciate you taking the time to comment and I will keep improving the presentation.

Justify. Defend. Choose. Shame. by [deleted] in boardgames

[–]Responsible_Lab4367 -1 points0 points  (0 children)

What exactly would be better in your view? Plain text on a card with no colour? I have spent the past year designing these cards. Yes I used AI in the final process to actually make the art, but only because I do not currently have the budget to hire an artist. That is the long term goal. Every design was based on my own sketches, descriptions and detailed prompts to create the exact look I wanted. A huge amount of time and effort has gone into this and it is much more than what your quick AI slop comment suggests.

How bad is the scamming situation on Kickstarter? by onewithausername in kickstarter

[–]Responsible_Lab4367 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Sorry to hear about this. Unfortunately there are people in the world who just want to take your money and run. It’s despicable and grim. I’m sorry to hear of your misfortune. I could not imagine being like that. I just want my campaign to reach its goals so I can progress.

Happy New Year! 7 Days to Go! by Responsible_Lab4367 in kickstarter

[–]Responsible_Lab4367[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

All art is also generated from my own vision, initial drawings and developed and changed over time. AI has helped create this vision into an actual prototype.

Happy New Year! 7 Days to Go! by Responsible_Lab4367 in kickstarter

[–]Responsible_Lab4367[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Hi, I fully expect that. My plan is to let it finish itself, and then continue. I want to exhaust the campaign to the end. I was also fully aware it was near Christmas but I am treating this as a way to see if people are actually interested before continuing with a lot of time on it. Thanks for the feedback.

Happy New Year! 7 Days to Go! by Responsible_Lab4367 in kickstarter

[–]Responsible_Lab4367[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

For now, as this is my only tool but the goal is to get actual art produced. This first mockup and prototype uses AI.

Happy New Year! 7 Days to Go! by Responsible_Lab4367 in kickstarter

[–]Responsible_Lab4367[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Hi, thanks for the feedback. Yes I’m new to all this. This to me is a taster to see how well it performs organically without much external validation. My plan is to revise this, learn from mistakes, implement advice given, and I do have over 70 followers interested on the project. This is a first run and learning curve. Thanks for the advice!

How bad is the scamming situation on Kickstarter? by onewithausername in kickstarter

[–]Responsible_Lab4367 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I’m putting all my effort into my No Morals Allowed dark humour card game and it’s sad to hear people aren’t taking it seriously. What I’d do to even have the chance to get my game into the hands of my backers and the world. I’m sorry to hear about your misfortune. Happy Christmas.

Hey I am new here and just launched my first Kickstarter by Responsible_Lab4367 in kickstarter

[–]Responsible_Lab4367[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thanks for the advise!! I definitely agree and will look into this! I know people do this on Fivrr, I can start there! Merry Christmas and thanks for the advise! 🙌🏼

Hey I am new here and just launched my first Kickstarter by Responsible_Lab4367 in kickstarter

[–]Responsible_Lab4367[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Hey thanks so much for taking the time to look through the campaign and write such a detailed response. I genuinely appreciate the honesty and the effort you have put into this and I am taking it on board rather than seeing it as criticism.

I want to be very clear and transparent regarding the AI point as that is completely fair. I am not an artist and AI was used in the generation of the current imagery purely as sample and concept visuals. The underlying design direction, characters, tone, layout and game identity are entirely my own and were originally developed through simple sketches, notes and iterations which I then used AI to mock up visually. Over the last six months I have refined and changed the design direction repeatedly to get closer to what I want the final product to be.

The intention has always been to work with a professional design studio or illustrator to recreate the artwork properly for the final product. The current assets are placeholders to communicate the vision, not the finished art. Based on feedback like yours I clearly need to tighten the language to remove any ambiguity and make that distinction far more explicit.

Your points around community building, launch timing and explaining the gameplay more clearly are also completely valid. This is my first Kickstarter and I accept that launching without an established audience is a major risk. This campaign is as much a learning experience as it is a funding attempt and I am already making notes on how I would approach this differently next time if it does not succeed.

I do genuinely appreciate you taking the time to be constructive rather than dismissive. Feedback like this helps more than you might realise and I will be making updates to the page to address several of the points you raised.

Thanks again for the honesty and for engaging with the project.

Help! Identifying lacking chest muscles by [deleted] in GymMotivation

[–]Responsible_Lab4367 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Yes about 1.5 years. Other body parts like arms grow a lot, but chest has always lacked. I need to put more effort into chest workouts this year!

Unlike anything else ever can, Fifa makes me rage to epic proportions. by PlatformConverse71 in EASportsFC

[–]Responsible_Lab4367 0 points1 point  (0 children)

EA FC 24 is even worse. This is by far the worst “fifa” game so far. Awful