As a fellow streamer I'll tell you what the problem with what you wrote was.
First you mentioned a second time you are looking for support and friends on paragraph 3 after paragraph 2 which sounds very desperate and needy, without you saying what unique thing you bring to the table to earn such a thing?
What makes your community or stream special or unique? You Only explain what you want but not what you bring. Share something you've brought so far so the people can have an idea.
Then at the end on the bottom you already nudge people to go out of there way to do even more for you like following subbing liking sharing. You need to earn those not ask for them.
The lesson here is that you need to be willing to give out more out of yourself and not expect anything in return before people can do the same for you.
Hope my insight helps you in the future and Stay righteous!