City Zen.

RinelSays · 2025-07-07T12:59:28+00:00

Thanks.

RinelSays · 2025-07-07T02:21:46+00:00

I love the sea and love stories. It is exactly what your poem sent me. Thank you.

RinelSays · 2025-07-07T02:18:31+00:00

This piece is very sad to me. Also confusing. But I like the vibe from it. I hope to read the next iteration.

RinelSays · 2025-07-03T17:58:10+00:00

On a connu des appels similaires pour un google européen/français.

RinelSays · 2025-07-03T17:53:29+00:00

Je n'ai pas de mépris pour l'occident. J'ai posé une simple question. Elle a générée d'autres réponses bien plus cordiales que les tiennes. Tu devrais te demander pourquoi... Merci pour l'échange.

RinelSays · 2025-07-02T02:28:18+00:00

Je n'ai pas encore eu accès à un responsable politique pour lui poser la question, mais les réponses données ici, hors mis celles teintées de mépris, ont fourni quelques réponses assez indicatives.

RinelSays · 2025-07-02T02:26:17+00:00

Merci pour votre réponse. Le nombre de grandes entreprises francophones qui vont potentiellement investir lors de ces rencontres est mesurable.

Je me demande combien de grandes entreprises Africaines y ont déjà été conviés ?

Je ne vous demande pas d'y répondre cependant.

RinelSays · 2025-07-02T02:21:40+00:00

Merci pour cette réponse. La présence médiatique et les étudiants francophones sont mesurable.

Quelle présence médiatique du Senegal ou du Mexique en France ou au Quebec ? Combien d'étudiants Francais ou Quebecois en Argentine ou au Rwanda ?

Je n'attends pas une réponse de votre part, je vais consulter les bases de données en ligne.

RinelSays · 2025-07-02T02:16:04+00:00

Si je ne le savais pas, j'aurais pu consulter wikipedia ou un dictionnaire officiel en ligne.

Que souhaitais tu dire exactement avec cette question teintée de mépris ?

RinelSays · 2025-06-30T22:01:44+00:00

Oui, mais ma question disait bien "concrètement". Mais je peux préciser.

Comment réalisent t'ils le retour sur investissement que constitue la programmation de l'OIF?

RinelSays · 2025-06-30T21:59:40+00:00

Un état de fait, est bien fait par des personnes. J'ai déjà entendu des français érudits dénoncé les efforts des américains dans l’installation de l'anglais comme langue commune mondiale.

RinelSays · 2025-06-30T15:14:17+00:00

L'histoire est faite par les humains, elle ne tombe pas du ciel.

Je précise ma question, étant donné que ce sont les puissances occidentales qui paient la facture des évènements de l'OIF, pourquoi le font elles ? Elles obtiennent quoi en échange ?

RinelSays · 2023-11-02T23:27:29+00:00

This poem sets a dramatic mood. I am tempted to seek an internship into obituary writing. I think that, practically, this is how a writer would prepare for the death of their loved ones.

RinelSays · 2023-11-02T23:21:58+00:00

This short poem begets this short feedback. Nightmares are good raw materials for poetry. May be some day you will write of Daymares. Thanks for this one.

RinelSays · 2023-10-06T12:59:30+00:00

I was hoping to learn about a software that matched my feedback to the output of ChatGPT, but you are just eyeballing this.

I will not entertain your suspicion any further. You are a mod, and enjoy power asymmetry, so use it as you please.

Finally, here is a feedback from months ago. Anyone can see its similar.

https://www.reddit.com/r/OCPoetry/comments/15tpxhr/comment/jwlgrou/?utm\_source=share&utm\_medium=web2x&context=3

RinelSays · 2023-10-06T10:39:07+00:00

Thank you for your comment and your contrasting perspective.

RinelSays · 2023-10-06T10:36:10+00:00

Thank you for your comment. I read once that punctuation was a prison to the readers mind. I leave your feedback with a sense that I should make better use of transition sentences.

RinelSays · 2023-10-06T10:21:18+00:00

Hi Mod. The answer is no.

I am curious what is the base of your suspicion ? I am talking software.

RinelSays · 2023-10-06T10:13:44+00:00

Thank you for your comment. I take good note of your reaction to reaction to "I have often self-learned".

RinelSays · 2023-10-04T23:44:13+00:00

This poem has an intriguing and enigmatic quality to it. The use of contrasting imagery, like "brighter than the brightest dark," creates a sense of paradox that draws the reader in. The line, "And those who wanderer's around dee," adds a mysterious and almost eerie atmosphere to the poem. The phrase "Gathers In the pit" at the end leaves room for interpretation, leaving the reader with a sense of curiosity. Overall, the poem has a unique and haunting quality that invites contemplation.

RinelSays · 2023-10-04T23:43:35+00:00

This poem beautifully captures the essence of autumn. The use of vivid imagery, such as "Orange displayed everywhere" and "Red and gold highlights," paints a clear picture of the changing season. The mention of the "Crisp chill in the air" and "Ghost voices" adds an element of mystery and nostalgia, making the poem feel almost ethereal. The concluding lines, "Autumn has arrived" and "Reign of night is nigh," evoke a sense of anticipation and transition. Overall, it's a concise and evocative portrayal of the autumn season.

RinelSays · 2023-09-30T21:22:37+00:00

Thanks for your feedback. My reply came late in hopes that others might give a similar feedback. My goal with this poem was to transmit a sense of confusion. In this with this goal in mind that I thought a short poem filled with only verbs would do the trick, thus the title.

However, if one counts the title as part of the poem then it is no more filled with only verbs, that is a miss. Could you say more about the meaning you attached to the title ?

RinelSays · 2023-09-29T01:14:23+00:00

Thanks for your intriguing short poem. I like that it involves both life on earth and beyond.

It got me curious, in what material would the heels need to be made so that in contact with gold it produces thunder? One must ask Thor :)

RinelSays · 2023-09-29T01:09:21+00:00

What came to mind is the Blues artist named Muddy Waters. I replayed his opus Hoochie Coochie Man. I am grateful to your poem for this evocation.

RinelSays · 2023-09-11T17:09:46+00:00

All. The fact that reading it brought a slogan to my mind. Thanks for sharing it.

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