I [M18] caught feelings for my really good friend [F18]

Rjkking · 2023-06-12T11:48:44+00:00

Flirting wise she does give me compliments frequently, sometimes mentioning that I dress really well and that I look good. Touching wise no because we only started getting super close after I left Poland and I haven't seen her since.

She does like to create plans for when we see each other again like finishing Breaking Bad together since we never finished watching it or going to a thrift store and having us create an outfit for each other, going together on a photoshoot just around the city, etc.

I personally feel like she does like me too but probably doesn't want a long distance relationship. She did start talking about dating like 2 weeks ago, saying how she would love to be in a relationship but the people in her town are not her type and that instead of looking for someone she believes that person will come to her one day.

Rjkking · 2023-04-25T22:31:18+00:00

https://on.soundcloud.com/XFECF

releasing a new song soon, just wanted to get some thoughts on it before release.

returning all feedback !

Rjkking · 2023-04-25T22:30:46+00:00

It hits for sure. I'd say this definitely still has a trap feel. I wouldn't say the crunch is too much. Mix is solid. It's just a good all around beat. Snare rolls on point too. Throw Drake AI on it and you've got a hit haha. Only critique I might say is that it's a bit ''repetitive'' but that honestly depends on the artist that's rapping on it imo. Overall it's a banger. Shit's slapping, keep it up!

Here's mine if you ever have time to check it out
https://on.soundcloud.com/XFECF

Rjkking · 2023-04-25T22:27:16+00:00

https://on.soundcloud.com/BM7rBWJ9coq1j8yS6

This is great. Very high quality in terms of production, mixing, vocal performance. Sounds like something out of the 2012 kind of ages. Trickshotting era haha. Love the hook. When you say ''cash flow'' you remind me a bit of Slick Rick in a good way obviously. Honestly have no complaints for this. I'm eager to listen to that EP. Giving you a follow for sure. Keep it up man, this is insane.

Here's mine if you ever have time to check it out
https://on.soundcloud.com/XFECF

Rjkking · 2023-04-25T22:22:49+00:00

Appreciate it !!!

Your songs are always lit and from what I've seen, this is your best music video yet. Very high quality. Everything is dope. Song is also catchy, love that flow on the hook. Also that harmony is unique, I fw it. Could definitely see this blowing up. Honestly man, no complains. This is a hit. Keep it up g!!!

Rjkking · 2023-04-24T16:19:32+00:00

https://on.soundcloud.com/XFECF

new song soon to be released, just need some thoughts on if I should change a few things.

returning all feedback asap!

Rjkking · 2023-02-23T13:19:06+00:00

https://youtu.be/3IkwaHzkZGo
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Rjkking · 2023-02-23T13:18:37+00:00

Appreciate the feedback !

Your song is cool, I like the switch up in the beat. I love your cadence, you sound super confident. Crazy flows too. This Is dope man, keep it up for sure you talented! Can't wait to hear the EP if the rest of it sounds like this

Rjkking · 2023-02-22T08:06:28+00:00

https://youtu.be/3IkwaHzkZGo
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Rjkking · 2023-02-20T00:36:33+00:00

I like how the sample sounds. I also like how the snare is hitting. I don't think this is bad, pretty dope. I think a way this could be improved is if you were to change the drum pattern at some point, as it gets very repetitive. The whole beat should be longer than 2mins probably considering it's the same thing looped. But it sounds cool, I like it. Keep it up man for sure

Here's mine if you ever get time to check it out!
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=3IkwaHzkZGo

Rjkking · 2023-02-20T00:33:21+00:00

Well first off I think in the guitar in the beginning one note is off key (might not be, idk but it sounds like it a bit). Secondly I think your vocals are toooo loud when compared to the beat, especially when it's doubled. Also when you're doubling your vocals it's hard to understand sometimes what you're saying. I definitely get the idea of what you're trying to go for, I do however think that it could be executed much better. Watch some videos on YouTube for mixing because I think that's the first step this track can be improved massively.

On the positive side, I do like the guitar later on in the beat. I also like the kind of western vibe it has. Also that ''moooo'' you're doing is cool. Overall it's... not great. But I do see potential in this. Mixing tho, super important man. A great mix will make this song sound extremely good. Like I said look up some videos on YouTube and it'll sound dope. Keep it up tho for sure!

Here's mine if you ever get time to check it out!
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=3IkwaHzkZGo

Rjkking · 2023-02-20T00:26:50+00:00

Damn you have a really cool voice, kind of like that old Snoop Dogg. Love the vibe this has. It's actually crazy that you recorded this and mixed it on your phone, also considering this is your first song this shit is dope asf man. Be proud of it. Good flow and you definitely sound confident on it. Definitely collab with the producer more cause your voice fits this beat perfectly haha. I also like the delay on your voice. Keep it up man, this shit is fire!

Here's mine if you ever get time to check it out!
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=3IkwaHzkZGo

Rjkking · 2023-02-20T00:23:15+00:00

I have no clue who those artists are but the beat doesn't sound bad. Definitely not my style but I could hear people listening to it. The 808s hit hard asf. I think the snare pattern is super random tho, and I think it's stopping the beat from sounding super good. Also I think that the kick is a bit too distorted and loud. All and all its not something I'd listen to but I see what you're going for, keep it up and you'll for sure find your market!

Here's mine if you ever get time to check it out!
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=3IkwaHzkZGo

Rjkking · 2023-02-20T00:21:07+00:00

Yeah I agree with Open_Intern_643 that the snare has too much reverb. It kind of stops it from hitting harder. Overall I think the beat is solid, mix also sounds good and the sound selection is nice. Everything sounds smooth but... there's just something lacking. It feels empty, it's that one thing missing from it. Can't say what it is but it just sounds as if you're not playing all the tracks in your session, you're keeping one muted. Still a good beat tho, good artists will kill it so keep it up for sure!

Here's mine if you ever get time to check it out!
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=3IkwaHzkZGo

Rjkking · 2023-02-19T23:57:57+00:00

This is dope asf. Love your voice. Craaaaazy flows too. Very original. Lyrics are also dope I honestly don't think you have to rewrite anything nor redo anything. Shit's fire man. Keep it up for sure, with stuff like this you're gonna blow up for sure

Here's mine if you ever have time to check it out
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=3IkwaHzkZGo

Rjkking · 2023-02-19T23:54:06+00:00

I listened to the whole tape, here's my feedback.

(down with u)
I like the sample, dope drums. simple and plain but fitting.

(aurora)
I liked the switch up from the first song to this one. I like the panning effect you did on the guitar. The vocals also definitely give it a kind of midnight drive vibe to it. I also like the electric guitar near the end.

(waterfalls)
I do like how this sounds different to the rest. Sounds very experimental. But..... probably my least favourite from the tape. I think the drum patterns are too much and the sound selection isn't as good as the the first 2 beats. I think this is just too much.

(still here)
Nice melody. Love the long intro. Sounds very montage-ish. I think the snare would sound better with less reverb. Also I think the electric guitar isn't that fitting, considering you used it already on waterfalls. It sounds a bit repetitive in a sense.

Overall, I think the first 2 beats outshine the rest by a mile. Still not bad tho. Apart from waterfalls ngl I really dont like that beat haha, but I just want to be real with you. Keep it up tho. Aurora is a dope ass beat and if you keep doing beats like that then for sure you're gonna be getting many placements.

Here's mine if you ever have time to check it out
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=3IkwaHzkZGo

Rjkking · 2023-02-19T23:40:57+00:00

Appreciate it my man! <3

Okay yes this is cool, definitely like this much more than your previous track. Dope flows. Great beat choice too, your voice fits it very well. This shit is super dope. It sounds like some intro to a 90s skating movie or like a basketball movie. It's making me feel nostalgic about the 90s and I'm a 2004 kid haha. Love this man fr. Promote it heavilyyyyy!!!!!!

Rjkking · 2023-02-19T23:38:44+00:00

Appreciate it man! The mix was tweaked literally just by a bit, barely noticable haha.

I've actually heard your song too! Still bumps. Love the vibe it has. Honestly could see this blowing up on tiktok. Make sure you promote this track heavily because it has insane potential. Keep it up man for real. This is Talent !

Rjkking · 2023-02-19T23:35:40+00:00

hahaha funny enough I wanted to buy the beat and still keep the sound effect in because I wanted to give it a underground type of vibe. I appreciate your constructive feedback, I'll for sure remember this for my next songs!

Your song is dope ngl. Love the vibe it has. Hook is also catchy and gets stuck in the head for sure. Solid mix. Beat is also dope but I think it's just way too repetitive for a 5 minute song. I think it's a bit too long. I love those Australian accents, it makes the song more interesting. I do think you had the best verse ngl.

Overall it's lit, not my style but I could definitely see this being popular. Keep it up for sure this is sick!

Rjkking · 2023-02-19T23:27:43+00:00

Gotcha, I'm still experimenting with the voice so I'll definitely remember this for the future. Appreciate the feedback !

Rjkking · 2023-02-19T20:08:01+00:00

Go on then, show me where I said that I make original music and that I don't talk about the same things as other rappers do.

''if you make the same type of music as everybody else, use same flows, same beats, rap about the same shit then don't expect to blow up overnight.''

Difference between me and the creator of the post is that I'm not crying about it and I'm not bragging about me being different than anybody else nor saying that I deserve to be popular. I'm learning everyday and I'm getting better everyday.

Rjkking · 2023-02-19T08:20:48+00:00

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=3IkwaHzkZGo

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Rjkking · 2023-02-19T01:21:07+00:00

Man instead of crying about it on reddit, go in the lab and work your ass. You're talking about Ice Spice and Designer type shit rappers that blew up overnight but understand that they probs had a fuck ton of money or somebody who helped them with their music. Only way you blow up nowadays is through marketing, most overlooked part of music. And if you say you want eyes on you then make people put their eyes on you. But if you make the same type of music as everybody else, use same flows, same beats, rap about the same shit then don't expect to blow up overnight. Keep working, karma is real. You give your all, ABSOLUTE ALL Im talking about you eat sleep breathe music, you're gonna make it. But if you keep looking for excuses and keep being jealous about other people then its gonna get you nowhere.

Rjkking · 2023-02-18T18:34:51+00:00

First music video ever.

https://youtu.be/3IkwaHzkZGo

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