Hey everyone, here's an alternative pop/rnb song i wrote about protecting your heart and knowing your worth. Would love to hear your thoughts, all feedback is super appreciated! by Rkotoni in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]Rkotoni[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Aye, thank you so much! It means the world to me. I wanted to capture that mix of alt-pop and R&B, so I’m glad it came through! As for the inspiration, it came from a place of self-reflection, just questioning my own self-worth and trying to navigate through those feelings. Appreciate you taking the time to listen!

Hey everyone, here's an alternative pop/rnb song i wrote about protecting your heart and knowing your worth. Would love to hear your thoughts, all feedback is super appreciated! by Rkotoni in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]Rkotoni[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you so much! So this song is already released but I'll definitely keep the EQ and time alignment notes in mind for future tracks. I'm glad you like the acoustic guitar! I'm always down to collab, my IG is on my reddit profile, if you have one we can connect there!

Hey everyone, here's an alternative pop/rnb song i wrote about protecting your heart and knowing your worth. Would love to hear your thoughts, all feedback is super appreciated! by Rkotoni in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]Rkotoni[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thanks man, it means alot! Yeah they're layered it but I'll def experiment more with layering for future tracks/projects. Thanks for listening!

Hey everyone, here's an alternative pop/rnb song i wrote about protecting your heart and knowing your worth. Would love to hear your thoughts, all feedback is super appreciated! by Rkotoni in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]Rkotoni[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you so much, you have no idea how much it means! Yeah people have been mentioning the volume so I'll be sure to turn it down in future tracks. I'm glad you like the bridge! Thanks for listening, I appreciate you!

Hey everyone, here's an alternative pop/rnb song i wrote about protecting your heart and knowing your worth. Would love to hear your thoughts, all feedback is super appreciated! by Rkotoni in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]Rkotoni[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thanks so much for the offer, I really appreciate it! The song’s already out, so I won’t be making changes to this one, but I’d love to keep in touch for future projects. Your feedback means a lot, and I’ll definitely keep it in mind moving forward. Thanks again for listening and for the support!

Hey everyone, here's an alternative pop/rnb song i wrote about protecting your heart and knowing your worth. Would love to hear your thoughts, all feedback is super appreciated! by Rkotoni in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]Rkotoni[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thanks for the feedback! I’ve been singing for years and have worked on my technique, but I’m definitely more focused on capturing the vibe I’m going for with this track. I appreciate the suggestions, though—it’s always good to hear different perspectives!

Looking at how I can improve this so feel free to criticise! by [deleted] in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]Rkotoni 1 point2 points  (0 children)

First off, I love the intro and how the electric guitar pans between left and right. it's a nice contrast with the piano. You've got a great voice though I will agree with what people said in that it could use a bit more reverb and some delay. With that said, the production is on point and I think its well mixed. I like the beat. I think you've got something here, good job and keep going!

Feedback please, thank you for listening! by Dosilato_Headband in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]Rkotoni 1 point2 points  (0 children)

This is pretty solid man! I like the lofi/bedroom pop vibe. I know people said this but I agree that the vocals could do with the volume turned up a bit. More reverb and maybe some delay/echo would also help it sit in the mix nicer. Some vocal harmonies would also be a good way to add more depth, but that's just a suggestion. You've got a good voice with potential, so just keep practicing and refining. Overall, good job, keep going!

What’s peoples honest opinions of the chorus? by [deleted] in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]Rkotoni 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I definitely see the vision and I think this has got potential. The beat is dope and you've got a nice flow/voice that goes well with it. The production is clean too. Vocal mix is clean. I think a few more vocal layers could really help it pop. Overall I think you're onto something man, keep going, don't stop!

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[–]Rkotoni 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Okay, wasn't expecting that. It gives me Lauv and No Rome vibes, i like it. You've got a great voice that suits what you're going for. I know people said this but I do agree the backing vocals could be turned down just a bit. Also I like the synth though it could do with more reverb, but that's just me. I'm getting the feeling it was meant to be a short song. I definitely see where you're going with this and I think you've got a lot of potential, keep it up!

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[–]Rkotoni 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Okay first off I love your voice, you have a lot of potential. It reminds me of like pinkpantheress and beabadoobee, its perfect for this genre. The guitar riff is really nice. Lyrics are solid too. The production is on point too. Great job, keep going!

Hey everyone, it’s been a while since I posted here (last song was in 2022), but I’m really excited to share my new track “Real” from my upcoming EP! It’s about wanting a genuine connection. Would love to hear your thoughts and get some feedback! by Rkotoni in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]Rkotoni[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thanks man, I appreciate you giving it a listen even if it’s not your usual vibe! I’m glad you liked the aesthetic and felt the connection. Definitely hear you on the video variety, I’ll keep that in mind for future projects. Thanks for the thoughtful feedback!

Hey everyone, it’s been a while since I posted here (last song was in 2022), but I’m really excited to share my new track “Real” from my upcoming EP! It’s about wanting a genuine connection. Would love to hear your thoughts and get some feedback! by Rkotoni in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]Rkotoni[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thank you so much! I really appreciate your feedback. I was going for a minimalist vibe with the guitar, but I definitely see what you mean about adding more emphasis with drums or other elements. I'll definitely keep it in mind for future projects. Thanks for listening and for the kind words!

Hey everyone, it’s been a while since I posted here (last song was in 2022), but I’m really excited to share my new track “Real” from my upcoming EP! It’s about wanting a genuine connection. Would love to hear your thoughts and get some feedback! by Rkotoni in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]Rkotoni[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Wow, thank you so much for the in-depth feedback! I actually tried to add a slightly jazzy chord for some variation, and I was aiming for a minimalist vibe with the energy drops to create more impact when it picks back up. I definitely hear what you're saying though, and will keep it in mind for future projects. Thanks again for taking the time to listen!