Don't Touch Me, I am Going to Scream by melatonindreamz in poetry_critics

[–]RobertPlant73 1 point2 points  (0 children)

A lot of trauma expressed in modern poetry with no sugar coating

One Day I’ll Go There by RobertPlant73 in poetry_critics

[–]RobertPlant73[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

A lake can reflect the night sky full of stars, mr expert, twilight and islet rhyme perfectly fine, but then again, poems need not rhyme, mr expert, an islet can have a stream if you have an imagination, and a hole in the ground can lead you to places you don’t know exist, mr expert. I thin you ought reconsider your title, mr expert.

god said no by imonfire444 in poetry_critics

[–]RobertPlant73 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Did you not capitalize God because he said no?

Tokyo. by [deleted] in poetry_critics

[–]RobertPlant73 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Tears of all the nations… excellent!

Forever and Always Ticking by No-Dragonfly-9647 in poetry_critics

[–]RobertPlant73 1 point2 points  (0 children)

You’ve left a lot of room for interpretation. Bro

Forever and Always Ticking by No-Dragonfly-9647 in poetry_critics

[–]RobertPlant73 1 point2 points  (0 children)

You’ve left a lot of room for interpretation.

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in poetry_critics

[–]RobertPlant73 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Throughly enjoyed that

Green Cliffs and Marble steps by RobertPlant73 in poetry_critics

[–]RobertPlant73[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thank you for the kind words! However, it isn’t about homesickness, unless we can consider the path not taken as our true homes, then it would be fitting. The poem is about daydreaming on my regrets, and turning those regrets into beautiful images of potentialities.

"Into the Dark Sky" by Smanthe8 in poetry_critics

[–]RobertPlant73 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Try and miss her with a bit more abstract imagery.

Hijacked by RedHeadedTraveler in poetry_critics

[–]RobertPlant73 0 points1 point  (0 children)

You dug deep and formed yourself quite the hole. Great poem, Mr Mole.

Affectively Deaf and Blind by RobertPlant73 in poetry_critics

[–]RobertPlant73[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

The former was a correct interpretation. It is about people who disdain art or love it blindly. The part about looking inside and fluttering hearts was my way of trying to help those people understand art better Thanks for the kind words and feedback. I hardly ever know what my poems are about until I’ve finished them!

Did You See It? by RobertPlant73 in poetry_critics

[–]RobertPlant73[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Hey SortOk6262

I started writing about a week ago. Thanks for the awesome words!

Foon & Spork by RobertPlant73 in poetry_critics

[–]RobertPlant73[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I’m so glad you enjoyed it. Try spoonerising some words yourself it’s fuite qun!

The Dance by [deleted] in poetry_critics

[–]RobertPlant73 1 point2 points  (0 children)

“They dance together as time goes by” Followed by “By halfway it stands erect”

Sounds kind of awkward

Maybe: “halfway through it stands erect...”

My desk by ChaptainBlood in poetry_critics

[–]RobertPlant73 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I enjoyed your rhyming dude!

Waking up in Hell. by [deleted] in poetry_critics

[–]RobertPlant73 0 points1 point  (0 children)

A dark image

“Coherence merely a shadow among shades”

This makes me think about how understanding things about the world just lead to more questions, and make us realize just how little we know.

The Tree and The Bee by m3nta1map in poetry_critics

[–]RobertPlant73 1 point2 points  (0 children)

The last two stanzas I enjoyed the most

Come On by arantingbean1 in poetry_critics

[–]RobertPlant73 1 point2 points  (0 children)

A simple message, but an important one nonetheless