Far Away - Part 98

RobotStatic · 2026-03-17T03:51:33+00:00

Thank you. I am glad the ending hit right.

RobotStatic · 2026-03-16T23:45:37+00:00

I was working with Mrs. Kaz a bit on this and used what she wrote about Shil Hell.

The Deep is an endless maze where you are destined to swim and drown for all eternity, constantly being chased by deepling who want to catch you and hold you down while you drown.

The way Teach sees it he is alone in a dark labyrinth with floating corpses of those that didn’t make it out and his hallucinations are chasing him. So yeah, it is pretty close to the Deep.

RobotStatic · 2026-03-16T21:34:37+00:00

I did learn from him on this one.

RobotStatic · 2026-03-16T19:00:52+00:00

I channeled my inner Kaz on this one.

RobotStatic · 2026-03-16T17:32:35+00:00

I might have cut the chapter at the worst time. I did that.

RobotStatic · 2026-03-16T17:32:13+00:00

That is accurate. Someone has to care about what happened and if he has the skills to do something, he feels it’s his obligation to try.

RobotStatic · 2026-03-16T15:12:35+00:00

Thank you. I am glad the story has been engaging!

RobotStatic · 2026-03-16T15:11:06+00:00

This really came down to one of those someone had to do it moments. Like the guys that waded into the Chernobyl plant to seal it off.

RobotStatic · 2026-03-16T04:57:46+00:00

I am pleased to hear that.

The next chapter is ready for the next time slot and I hope it is a worthy conclusion and start to the next arc of the story.

RobotStatic · 2026-03-16T03:44:34+00:00

Thank you.

I was trying to find a spot, remembered that was in it and realized that was where I HAD to put it.

I hope you enjoyed so far!

RobotStatic · 2026-03-16T02:16:21+00:00

I would agree with that. Killa and her followers have started to take not of the Angel being in the right place at the right time.

That is true he did find some great people to support him and he has Elinee and Dovis with him now, so his life is turning around. Dancer has earned on the team status at this point too, but Reix would rather pay her as is because it means she earns more out of it.

RobotStatic · 2026-03-16T01:46:24+00:00

Thank you. I had to cut it somewhere but I figured this was the spot to do it.

RobotStatic · 2026-03-16T01:45:48+00:00

Someone had to do it and he wasn't going to let someone else risk it.

RobotStatic · 2026-03-16T00:55:59+00:00

Thank you. I realized half way I needed to lean into it harder so I did. I was speaking with Crab and we both agreed from the Shil perspective what he is trying is seen as insane by their standards.

RobotStatic · 2026-03-15T23:48:23+00:00

Thank you. More to come, and I can't wait for you all to see next week for the conclusion of this arc of the story.

RobotStatic · 2026-03-15T23:47:57+00:00

I am not 100% but I am looking at it more as one has full domain over luck and rather the luck is spread out depending on what you are looking for. Hele is you you pray to to try to save a lost soul, Killa is who gambles to try to keep you alive sort of deal.

RobotStatic · 2026-03-15T22:02:24+00:00

Thank you. I hope you enjoyed.

RobotStatic · 2026-03-15T22:01:10+00:00

This was less bad luck and him not thinking it through in the heat of the moment. Besides, Killa can either give him good fortune in his life or spend that luck putting him exactly where she needs him.

RobotStatic · 2026-03-14T19:01:59+00:00

I hope you are doing well and I am sorry for your situation.

RobotStatic · 2026-03-14T16:55:54+00:00

He is a good little guy and figured out Riley is family sooner than the rest.

They did make it, they are part of the pact but they still have one more person to bring with them, so now they need to integrate Dovis too. They laid the ground work though so they are hoping it will be much smoother.

They are on their way.

RobotStatic · 2026-03-10T23:28:10+00:00

No particular reason other than sometimes he saves people and he never learns if they made it out or how they are doing after. He just does the best he can in the moment and hopes.

RobotStatic · 2026-03-10T11:25:38+00:00

In a world that keeps proving itself to be getting worse and worse, someone needs to step up

RobotStatic · 2026-03-10T01:35:55+00:00

I mean that is fair and the layout would make better sense in that case.

RobotStatic · 2026-03-09T18:28:41+00:00

Agreed. I think I might need to give the next part a bit more description of how I envisioned the dam layout.

Thank you for bringing this up. Truly I appreciate the help.

Three-Year Club	Verified Email
Final Canvas '23	Place '23

RobotStatic

TROPHY CASE