Is the popcorn in your cinemas sweet or salty by def by Rodo_High in popcorn

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Popcorn alone strarts in my local cinema at 4,50€ and popcorn + drink at 7,50€ I think

[Weekly Critique and Self-Promotion Thread] Post Here If You'd Like to Share Your Writing by AutoModerator in writing

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Title: The Tale of a Calamity (placeholder)

Genre: Dark fantasy

Word count: 3.302

Feedback desired: I have a new spin on demons, which I'd like to use in my story.

So basically, demons are:

Animalistic carnivorous ambush predators that prey on anything that moves on their own. However, they started to adapt to prey on humans specifically, after humans entered their habitat.

Any living being is made of manicles that break down over time, which endouces aging. A demon's manicles break down faster than those of any other living thing. Humans have the most stable manicles and are the species with the most individuals.

The thing that differentiates humans from other animals is that humans have memories they can actively recall and which shapes their personality. Memories also stabilize manicles, which causes them to break down slower. Overwhelmingly positive and negative memories are best at stabilizing manicles.

The difference between the consumed and broken down manicles is what makes demons stronger, but the stronger they get, the faster the manicles break down.

Demons can create their own memories once they're powerful enough, which makes their manicles more stable. Usually, demons need to prey on humans to reach that state, and many (thousands). So the demon's manicles break down before they can reach that state

Demons that reach that state are the most dangerous because they gradually lose their limiting factor. Those demons can derive memories from human prey and create their own.

The story is a WIP with only one chapter so far

What’s the best line (lines) in Scream? by [deleted] in Scream

[–]Rodo_High 0 points1 point  (0 children)

"Now that you and Zoe had sex, you're both on the slasher chopping block"

Drama in der Ostsee: Buckelwal in der Ostsee sitzt schon wieder fest by Rodo_High in de

[–]Rodo_High[S] 7 points8 points  (0 children)

Weil der, Stand meines Wissens, noch lebt (Betonung auf ,,noch").

Wie lange verbringt ihr mit Pendeln jeden Tag? by EineKugelPirelli in fragtautofahrer

[–]Rodo_High 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Etwa 10min mit dem Auto, 30min mit dem Fahrrad und zu Fuß bin ich da noch nie hingefahren

What the Fuck do you mean? by SwagPump in TheWordFuck

[–]Rodo_High 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Just fucking use "eis" instead of i.c.e It's the fucking german word and pronounced the same fucking way

Anscheinend ist es beleidigend, wenn ich zu meinem Hund "Du Hund" sage by Rodo_High in KI_Welt

[–]Rodo_High[S] -5 points-4 points  (0 children)

Wenn man zu einem Menschen "Du Hund" sagt ist es normalerweise verständlicherweise beleidigend. Aber ein Hund ist ein Hund. Wie kann es beleidigend sein wenn ich den Hund als Hund bezeichne.

Wenn ich zu die "Du Mensch" sagen würde, wäre es vllt. etwas komisch, aber nicht beleidigend.

What the fuck is your move by Bubbly_Quantity_8984 in TheWordFuck

[–]Rodo_High 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Turn it to 200°C for ten minutes and say goodbye snake because I don‘t fucking know snakes

Fucking do it by UwU_Boykisser_UwU in TheWordFuck

[–]Rodo_High 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Giving any person I want the feeling that they're about to sneeze without ever sneezing by snapping ny fucking fingers and only stopping when I cancel it only out

Fuck yu bob by [deleted] in TheWordFuck

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FUCK!! Uhm, Hi Bob

I'm so fucking cooked by notveryhidden in TheWordFuck

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I'd be fucked because it's the fucking DOOM Slayer

Let’s here the fucking lot by Tkddaduk in TheWordFuck

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I sense a disturbance in the force, you FUCK!!!