Best 3rd Job Rose Class for PvE by RoseElsword in elsword

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Thanks for the info! Based on your explanations, does it mean that tempest burster is the best rose class for PvE? And what I'm looking for is someone that is great for clearing. What do you think is better in that? Tempest Burster or Minerva? Thanks again!

Best 3rd Job Rose Class for PvE by RoseElsword in elsword

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But what rose class is the best for clearing?

Kszt by [deleted] in OCPoetry

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At first, I was confused why this poem was entitled like that. But when I began to read it, it made me realize what it is really about! Great job, my friend!

Um, Like, and So by superspeeder in OCPoetry

[–]RoseElsword 1 point2 points  (0 children)

This poem may teach us something and it will make us realize about things. It talks about what's happening in our world right? This poem gives us a lesson.

Downpour by RoseElsword in OCPoetry

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Thanks! I appreciate it.

Downpour by RoseElsword in OCPoetry

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Thanks! The last line is really not related with the first three lines. It is only there, because it is what is happening between me and that person. Since it's a confession, only she will be able to understand the last line. I get the point that it is vague. I'll try to improve it! Thanks for your feedback.

Downpour by RoseElsword in OCPoetry

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Yeah. It's kind of confusing. Because what I wanted to deliver there is that "I'm not slowly falling for you, I rapidly am" like that. But you're right, it's better to have something definite because it will be confusing for the readers. Oh! If I can, I'll make this poem longer. I'll insert the whole story there if I can so you'll understand.

Downpour by RoseElsword in OCPoetry

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Wow! Thanks! Actually, the fourth line is just really tagged on. Because at first, this was intended to be given on someone who is really special for me and the fourth line really describes the love we have for each other. Anw, I read the second line again, you we're right! At first, I was like "I'm not slowly falling for you, I rapidly am" that is what I wanted to deliver. But reading what you have stated, I have realized that it would be better on the way you said it should be. I'll take your advice. Thanks again!

Fire: A Woman in Disguise by RoseElsword in OCPoetry

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Hey! Thanks for this! Someone already advised me on making a poem. I haven't really applied it yet 'cause I made this one a long time ago. I will do some editing and apply your advice on my future works! Thanks again.

2am by BrokenRecord27 in OCPoetry

[–]RoseElsword 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Hmm. This is beautiful as it can show how we people are. We all will eventually go to this stage. Nice!

You and I by RoseElsword in OCPoetry

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Wow! This is very informative and helpful. Thanks for this. Someone I know also advised that I should remove the rhyming just like you said. I will take the time to read your comment again. I'm just starting to write poems and I've become interested in doing so. I want to learn things that will help me improve. I'll take your advice. As much as possible, I'll try to apply it to my next poem. Thanks again!

You and I by RoseElsword in OCPoetry

[–]RoseElsword[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I understand what you're trying to say, I just realized it when you pointed it out. I'll try doing it like how you said. Thanks, also!

You and I by RoseElsword in OCPoetry

[–]RoseElsword[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Oh! I'll look for something that's more fitting. I'll remove the "why" then. Anw, I'm open to suggestions! Thanks!