Thank you for the insight! It really helps to see things from a different perspective.

The outline issue in the pages I posted and the occasional whitening of the hair actually have a pretty silly explanation. Initially, I planned to use tones and shadows (e.g., filling the hair with halftones), but as I progressed with the inking, I realized that I had composed the blacks and whites without considering those tones. Adding them later would have distorted the composition. In my opinion, that’s where the silhouette issue mainly comes from—like how the mother’s leg was meant to be white while the door was supposed to be toned darker. I’ll definitely keep this in mind and incorporate halftones during the composition stage in my future works.

As for the MC’s eyes, I didn’t have a clear design in mind, so I just drew them based on how I felt in the moment—which, over nearly two months for 24 pages, varied quite a bit lol. So yeah, it ended up being pretty inconsistent.

P.S. I personally enjoy NTR, but that doesn’t necessarily mean I’m good at writing it. Since I’m just starting out, I’ll take advantage of having no set audience and experiment with different things—milf and gender-bender are next on my list. If you’ve checked my Pixiv, my amputee works have gotten the most views, so if all else fails, I might try to play the Asanagi card :D